Well I just finished reading everything currently up from beginning to end all in one sitting. I must say the story itself is entertaining and imaginative. I was annoyed from time to time from words that seemed to be improperly used, but not enough to deter me from enjoying what I found.

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man u realy have got to update. I thought u said it would be done in may,2004? anyway this story is really exciting can't wait fot the next update

Uh, hi, I jsut stumbled across this two years after your last update and beg of you to continue. It's good.

Very high writing level. Impressive story. Please continue.

ive been waiting for the update to this since the last chapter. i really hope you havent done like all the other good writers and called it quits for pokemon fics.

well its good u updated!

What happened to ash O_o;; he didn't become a pokemon did he? -sweatdrops- update update -whines- it's almost 2 months you fart -bap- ah well,don't update so fast, that way i won't feel guilty for not reading if you don't update ;)

come on COME ON you still have time to kill off Ash lol. NM that its way too late, (~_-) I saw that some people were disappointed with me wanting to kill him of respectable. Review: Must say, paragraph 36 is alot like Paragraph 40 of part 1 of my flag story Pokemon Ex. Just check it out. It begins with "Ash went behind a large rock to change..." you'll see the resemblance lol. AND ITS BEEN A WHILE SINCE YOU LAST Put up a nother chapter i can wait... se!. Please update ur story its really good even though ash is still alive. (See you've REALLY improved grammar and stuff. REALLY improved!) I ADDED YOU TO EVERY POSSIBLE CHECK MARK THINGY I COULD LOL!) ok i've spoken!(breath)

Please continue, I am just itching to find out what happens next :). I can't wait to read the rest of this story. You are an extremely talented writer!

This was kinda confusing to read but it was pretty good none the less. And don't worry teachers aren't trying to kill you. they just want you to suffer for the last bits of school is all. Update as soon as you can.

Good chapter, not your usual quality, but good all the same since its been so long since your last update. Nice bit of suspense at the end, one question though. How did Ash and Misty get naked, kind of threw me for a loop when Ash went to get their clothes, you never said they took them off to dry and then that would mean...

Well, that is quite interesting that no matter how fast you have the story flow that there will still be just as many chapters. _ Anyway, I like how you worked this. This is a nice chapter. And is a welcome relief to all the tense chapters that you've had up lately in this fic. Also, does the Song of Lugia have anything to do with this fic as in how this will end? Or not. Or is it just that you can't tell me because it'd spoil part of the fic? _- Anyway, I can't help but wonder what's happened to Ash. Several possibilities are going through my mind, but I can't come up with one that I can expect, because all of them are pretty much just as likely and possible. Anyway, please do try to get another chapter up this month. I really want to know what happens to Ash. _

Wow...took me about 4 days to read this story. Its such a good story I absolutely love it. Great job...My hats off to you thunder mouse pikachu, that is if I wore a hat. Anyways great job I am looking forward to your next update.

What happened? Why did Ash take so long? Earlier, did Misty se a memory of a sort from Ash's past? If so, what was his dad talking about when he gave Ash that box? What was in it? Why was it a heirloom? Is Ash part Pokémon? Why was he able to talk with Pikachu telepathecally? How does he know that Pokégods? Why were they lecturing him? Wh... *gladdecease moans, holds her head in her hands* Oh...I have too many questions right now...answer them ASAP, kay? By the by, good job.