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Human-at-Heart chapter 11 . 3/5/2016 I really liked it! Ideas: Have something horrible happen and Draco aparrate(idk) and find her-Ron get annoyed yayaya Hermione"What is it?" Draco" Honestly idk, but Dumbledore sent me to get you ASAP" H-okkk? D-you might want to hold on H-TO WHAT?! D-*smirks* to me *H clutches his arm, aparrates and Ron is POED* 2: yayaya Pansy is JEALOUS of Hermione, and she is still dating Draco so she sets up a prank (WitHOUT Draco knowing) for Hermione like in front of the WHOLE SCHOOL like making her muddy and saying like HAHAHA YOU'RE A TRUUUUUE MUDBLOOD NOW! Or something like that H runs away trying to hold in the tears but eventually failing-Ron and Harry are following but she doesn't care. SHE DOES NOT CAAARE!-suddenly she smackes into someone HARD. They grab her arm to keep her from falling. She looks up. Her heart sinks and stops and turns completely to stone. He keeps her steady LIKE HE DID ONCE BEFORE ON THE STAIRCASES. His eyebrows and mouth frown as he takes in her present state. "Hermione, what happened?" He almost looked CONCERNED. But that must be her mind tricking her. "Don't you mean, MUDBLOOD?" She spat. Draco looked ever so confused as her two friends came panting around the corner. "Well," Ron said, "if it isn't the prick of the hour? Let's go Hermione. He got what he wanted." Ron threw such a sneer at Draco, that Draco moved back a little in pure shock. He'd only seen Harry show that much disdain for him in an expression. Draco realized that he was still holding onto Hermione's arm and should probably let go but...given the circumstances it might've been unwise plus she still looked a little unsteady. So instead he looked straight into those beautiful, hurt eyes and asked "What happened?" Ron scoffed "Are you joking it was-" Draco was aware the Weasley was still talking, throwing insults mainly-he'd learned to tune those out at a very you age-but he wanted to hear it from HER. The one who had warmed his heart time and time again. The one who acted like he was bearable to be around. The one who(that idk) KNEW things that even he didn't because she loved to learn and read and-. The one who had been hurt and insulted simply because of where she came from. The one who was looking at him like he'd failed her. He did not like that feeling. It was worse thay failing his father, somehow. Weasley was still yelling when Hermione opened her mouth to speak. And was immediately interrupted by who else? Pansy. She was all giggles and winks as she strutted around the corner, "Oh Drakey," she sang. Hermione withered for a moment then straightened her back and pulled her arm for his grip, there was a familiar gleam in her eye that made Draco extremely suspicious of Pansy. Ron had stopped speaking but looked more furious that ever. Draco narrowed his eyes and before anything was said he said darkly barely holding back his fury "Pansy. What Did You DO.?" Pansy flinched involuntarily and looked slightly nervous as she straightened her back, " I-I" she sucked in a DEEP breath. Smiling cruely she said, "I simply pulled a joke on darling Granger and it seems she could not take it." Out of the corner of Draco's eye he saw Hermione's chest puff up along with her hair, her eyes flashed as her wand was raised. "Wait." Draco said, " you're Head Girl now. Don't do this. Not here or now." Hermione paused. Pansy smiled like she had trapped her prey on a corner and there was nothing it could do. It ANGERED him. White specks flickered in his vision. "WHAT PRANK WAS IT PANSY CAKES?" he said it in a way that was soothing yet TERRifying. Pansy started to quake-he never called her that not unless to severely annoy her or he was SERIOUSLY POED at HER. "We-it was mainly me but Blaize helped out we yayaya pranked explanation that could've been told through H's perspective maybe more details." When she had finished there was silence that droned on and on and OOOON."Drakey? Are you mad?" He jaw was cleched and there was a rare fire in his eyes. "Why would I be mad? Angry at you? I mean," he gestured around, "all you did was go behind my back because you were jealous and insecure because i didn't spend every waking second with you and pull a horrid 'prank' on the HEAD GIRL, my co-worker who I against all odds after all these years GET ALONG WITH. Who did nothing wrong i might add! NOTHING to deserve THIS!" Draco hissed, "who is actually a decent person who YOU did this to!" Pansy was shaking scared and shocked with tears in her eyes. "All because you didn't trust me," he whispered. Pansy whispered, "I-I," her voice broke. "I cannot let this stand. If you don't trust me now when will you ever?" "D-don't" "I'm sorry Pansy. It's over. I am breaking up with you. We're done." "NOOOOOO I TAKE IT BACK I TAKE IT AAAAALLLLLL BACK JUST PLEASE DON'T LEAVE ME!" "My mind is made up, Pansy" "NOOOOOO" *runs off crying* *Heartfelt moment with the group-approving words from Harry(still sassy though), a nod from Ron and a Thank You and maybe even a hug from 'Mione* As Draco turned to go he looked back at Hermione, "Hey at least I didn't throw her in a ditch." Hermione laughs a true laugh. The boys look confused. And Draco half smiles-it's been a rough day for him. Cursed outdoors(or wherever this happened I pictured it there like it happened outside and she ran inside or visa versa). Anyways I think that should happen later after some character development. But I think the next Ch. Should be them seeing the Dorm Common Room Kitchen and FREAKING OUT over their rooms(which are slightly respectable of their houses color-wise idk). I picturing gold and silver and white for the Common Room so it's not like biased to the houses idk that may be just me. Sorry if this is too much! 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The-Only-Weasley-Girl chapter 6 . 7/31/2014 I got a bit confused at the same ending of the last chapter, but then I realised it was a different POV XD Really enjoyed this so far, keep it up c: |
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The-Only-Weasley-Girl chapter 1 . 4/16/2014 This story has a really interesting beginning, and I look forward to more! Good job c: |