Great stuff! Finally someone writing about their first time (together)...I loved it! I was amazing!

That was really fluffy and romantic. Good job!

I love your descriptions, and I love the ending. You characterized Hyde pretty well, and I like how Jackie toned down a little - I like her better that way. Kudos on a well written fic.

That...was awesome.

Really nice! Thats the Hyde we all know and love. Well written, no grammar or spelling problems; I felt I was right there watching it happen. BRAVO!

I loved that marker part, so sweet. Not to mention the rest of the story. Keep writing!

Very nice job. I love how they signed each other. :o)

lol. guess i'll have to review again.. i still adore it, i love fics in jackie's pov! i'm waiting on more from you!

I really liked this. I love the marker pen idea.

Very cute story! I love J/H stories, especially happy ones.

Awwwwwww! Now, that, folks, was awesomeness;)

Awwww... That gave me warm fuzzy feelings. Please, please, PLEASE write a sequel.

I fear words cannot do this story justice. It is well, amazing. I was wondering when someone would tackle Jackie and Hyde actually having sex in a practical and believable way. And the marker thing was just so sweet. I absolutly love this one. Please write more like this. You did a great job with Jackie's perspective and I think the characterization of both was quite believable. Again an absolutly amazing and stunning story. Makes me want Hyde more! lol :)

Love, Ally

Great story. Please write more like this. I love this kind of mushy stuff, but not the sad kind.