Wonderful five chapters.

you brat madoka's gay and you didn't keep going and have homura gay with madoka fuckin ugh great writing but dude ugh

Yay another kyouhomu story! And awsome story so far 10/10 amazing! Very good with every wording.

Omg, I f-ing love this. The scenario where Homura and Kyouko pretty much bros is my favorite, especially when they begin to romance and it's a LITTLE more awkward than any other relationship.

You tell it well.

And there we have it. I like the dynamic between them in this story, but it definitely isn't conducive to a romantic relationship. At least things ended smoothly between them. Well, I enjoyed this story and I look forward to seeing more from you.

Poor Madoka any chance of a sequel to this? perhaps a MadoHomu one with Madoka wearing the pants *looks at Lynx with puppy eyes and if that doesn't work then kitten eyes*

I thought the witch sounded familiar once Homura mentioned slowing magic i haven't actually read Oriko Magica but i have read about it and about Kirika Kure

I'm going to have agree with FoldedHands that the near constant usage of "she" and "her" got a little confusing at times.

I completely disagree about Kyoko and Homura being mismatched. They have the most dynamic and fun to read relationship. So I hope to see more of best couple KyoHomu.

Ouch. I have read Confessions and One More Drink, so I knew that this wasn't going to last long between them, but it's kind of painful to watch how mismatched they are. If Kyoko keeps it up, this relationship will be over in a matter of days.
Don't take that the wrong way-I'm not criticizing this at all. Your writing is fine and I'm enjoying the story so far. It's just plain to see that there is no romance in the relationship, and I feel like Kyoko's going to be a little hurt when it ends because she seems to want it more than Homura.
One criticism I have to make is the use of pronouns in these stories. With all of the characters in a scene being the same gender, using "she" and "her" too much can get confusing really quickly for the readers. Try to watch out for that.
Now I'm curious about whatever happened between Kyoko and Mami in the past. That's another offhand comment that you could develop a story out of, or perhaps just explain it in a little more detail in a future chapter.

No happy ending? Well that's just disappointing. :(

*sigh* Well, I guess I'll take what I can get.

The extreme lack of KyoHomu fanfics disturbs me greatly. Especially considering how perfect Homura and Kyoko are for each other.

Anyway I love this is going so far, so I can't wait for more. The writing is good too.

Thank Madokami for more KyoHomu fanfiction. :)