Not bad.

love it please continue and write more will ms frizzle be in the story she my favorite

FANTASTIC ENDING

I've read this fanfic, and I've got to say that it was very creative and well done. You should write more Magic School Bus fanfictions. Maybe even some sequels or prequels to some of your other stories. Can't wait for more fanfictions.

Loved the epilogue, especially everything Wanda and Keesha did and said.

Thank you for a great story, which was well worth waiting to see it though. Looking forward to your next project.

Points for degree of difficulty in writing two weddings with hijinks and drama and kicking so much ass at it.

Loved basically everything you did with Phoebe this chapter: From the B99 references to the moments with Keesha to standing up to Janet to the wedding jitters.

When I went back and saw R/P's wedding was in March, it clicked why the honeymoon was in Florida. Did they get the baseball organ music though?

Aww at Wanda and DA at the end. Someone in there, Wanda's a big softie.

Oh my goodness... I was going to post about all my favorite parts as I normally do, but I can't even collect my thoughts... This is probably my favorite story ever and I've been following it from the start, but it only just hit me that there's only one more chapter. It's really crazy to look back at the earlier chapters and see how much the characters have developed. Why, they were just babies at the beginning!

I guess the big question is: is DA's theory true? I was sure after the last chapter that the couples were pretty much settled, but then all the Wanda drama this chapter threw me off, as did Tim's reluctance to move to New York. For a second, I thought Tim and Wanda might end up kissing, but then Wanda called Tim boring so probably not.

Speaking of Wanda, I was so surprised to see how quickly her life kinda fell apart! But seeing Keesha and the others taking care of her was too sweet; as dysfunctional as the group can be, I would kill for friends like that.

Other small things I wanted to comment on:
-I found it hilarious that Keesha and Tim were riding the same train and just didn't notice
-Poor Wanda, retail's no fun
-Phoebe surprising Ralphie was super cute! I was actually pretty worried when I realized she wouldn't be home for his birthday, so I'm glad she did that
-Ralphie's birthday will remain cursed until the day he dies
-DA comparing Janet to Putin was priceless
-I can totally imagine Wanda going on a reality show now that you've mentioned it
-Airing dirty laundry whilst trapped in a snowstorm is a classic Carlos idea and is 100% something he'd do
-No more Oregon! Phoebe meeting the others in the airport was another cute scene-I love how she just goes down the list catching up with everyone

So I guess I'll stop writing there since I've been rambling for a little while. In conclusion, awesome chapter, but I don't know if I'm mentally prepeared for the ending. Still, I can't wait to see how everything wraps up!

This was a fun Sunday evening surprise!

Loved the deconstruction of Wanda's and DA's flaws and how it does and will hold them back. Real life is a bitch that way.

Carlos causes problems. Keesha fixes them. Sounds about right.

Damn Yankees.

"Do you think you'd live here forever?" Of course he did. Ralphie hates change.

Love everyone's various struggles and uncertainties about their lives. Very much how that just out of college/start of adulthood is like. Tim's analysis of the three couples was great too (and don't think I didn't notice the nudge towards him and Wanda to complete The Theory).

Oooh, a time jump. Very Parks and Recreation-like. Looking forward to it.

Another great chapter! I'm not sure that's the couple that could pull off a surprise wedding, but hey, if they were able to convince their families, good on them.

I should've seen R/P coming, since that's your usual ship. It works though.

With three pairings down in the group, the question turns to Wanda and Tim. Tim/Janet doesn't seem like it's going to end well, and Wanda's fling with Harry seems just that. Looking forward to the rest.

Damn. Just damn. Well done.

Oh Tim, New York turned into a jerk so quickly. I will say if there was a member of gang most likely to withdraw from the rest, it's probably Tim, so that makes sense.

I'm with Phoebe. Always ask if it's Carlos first, because there's always a chance it is. At the same time, I'm with the others regarding Phoebe: Get out and date woman! Oregon is paradise for you!

Great job as always.

"DA drives like a grandma." So, she drives like Milka Duno then? /racing joke I don't expect anyone else to understand

I loved how most everyone wanted nothing to do with their parents. That's very much how early 20s people are, at least from my experience. Also loved everything Wanda did this chapter, in all her impulsive, manipulative glory.

My first thought was Ralphie and Arnold took that boulevard of broken dreams, Route 30. Then they ended up in Intercourse and it hit a new level of brilliance.

Poor Phoebe, a double heartbreak (and apparently we both see members of the Terese family as social workers...).

I feel I need a diagram, but next year it's Tim in New York, DA still in Pittsburgh, Phoebe in Corvallis (aka Western Idaho), and the rest in Philly. Five of them in one place can not end well, especially when one of them is Wanda.

Ah, the old reset, and with only one relationship inside the group. Interesting, especially Carlos/Janet, which on the surface feels like property damage waiting to happen. *puts fingers together like Mr. Burns*

Phoebe is exactly right. The Cardinals *are* the Yankees of the Midwest.

DA is to margaritas as I am to Jagerbombs. Never again.

Nice job as always.

Phoebe knowing The Aristocrats is the best thing ever.

Arnold's summation of the girls' thoughts about The Theory is dead on. It's sad to see them start to drift apart, but that's what happening.

Kim knows how evil Marlins ownership is, that's why.

Yes, 2003 was Shake Ya Tailfeather, Ignition, and that song that was a hip hop cover of a Bryan Adams song.

Great job so far, and I'm sure the drama is just beginning.