Reviews for Little Heroes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awww. Cute. Write more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is actually pretty plausible. :) But the best part was definitely the quote from Mustang. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Based on the notes, it seems like this and Uncontrolled Chaos are supposed to be in the same series. If that's the case, and Cross is an alchemist in both, why would Izumi be the one teaching Allen alchemy and not Cross, why would Izumi let Cross stay with them when she /hates/ state Alchemists, and why would Allen learn alchemy, having lost so much to it? It's also a bit surprising that Allen isn't a little more wary of Ed when he learns who he is. *grin* The interaction between Allen and Ed is priceless. The two of them have so much in common. The two of them shuddering over Izumi without knowing they're talking about the same person is really amusing. That parenthetical statement about not getting mixed up with Exorcists is so perfectly Mustang it's not even funny. How do you /do/ that?! Mmm. It's interesting seeing what alchemy looks like when someone who isn't very competent with it does it. This would be a fun universe to explore and to see how Ed and Allen's paths continue to intersect. Although its been long enough I wold be surprised if you picked it up again. I'm glad you shared these three oneshots though. *grin* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please write more I would like to see how their friendship goes on! |
![]() ![]() I LOVE THE IRONY |
![]() ![]() XD "We don't want to deal with your shit; it's too weird" is almost hypocritical of all of them. XD I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this... alot... - |
![]() ![]() I quite like this. The blend between the two universes isn't overly dramatic but subtle and believable? (I don't know if that's the right word I'm looking for). It's good to see both Allen and Ed written in character well. It was a good read, I look forward to more! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. i like how you combined the two worlds and the character interactions between Allen and Ed. i would love to see a longer story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Allen and Ed mix well, REALLY well. This story is a great one too (like the one I read before*smile*). But there's a lot of questions unanswered and I'm really confused. Are the one shots related with one another? How did Allen and Ed end up together, in a prison(by the sound of it I think so at least) no less?*frown* Anyway, I think I will like this story wherever this leads to. A very good work yet again and I wish you will continue this story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really, really liked this. It wasn't just the interesting plot, it was the character's own resolution that set this fic apart. I also thought the way the two organisations both have an avoidance policy of the other, it makes it more continuous for both plot lines that the two never interact. Loved the way you wrote both Ed and Allen, and I hope to be able to read their next meeting! |
![]() ![]() I like the mashup. Well coordinated! |
![]() ![]() ![]() :D I really like it! (Update your other stories!) |