Reviews for Bartolomeo's Dream
catspats31 chapter 1 . 8/25/2019
While the writing quality of your story is good in terms of spelling and grammar, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:

"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."

Remove all of the detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in this story if you want it to remain at this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is allowed such as AdultFanfiction.
Naruhi1738 chapter 1 . 3/14/2018
I loved this
N Harmonic chapter 1 . 8/21/2015
Sequel!
guren666 chapter 1 . 8/8/2015
Hot, hot and once again hot. Luffy is not so dense as he seems. Barto finally achieved his dream!
Pikagirl556 chapter 1 . 4/16/2015
Wow 0o0. Really good and different than most
Jacqueline Spicer chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
YES, YES, YES!
You are my hero for writing this!
It's about time a Luffy X Bartolomeo fanfic got published. :D
Thank you! I was squealing the whole time I read this. XD
Lynn chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
Huuuhuhuhu! Nice. Just found out about Bartolomeos crush on Luffy and had to find some fanfiction about it immidiately. Hope there is more to come and maybe a bit more detailed description of Bartolomeos feelings? I would really appreciate that. Otherwise it can seem a bit, well, dull, maybe? Still thank you for the chapter! Hope you'll continue the work.
zeues0817 chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
Nyahaha! This is awesome! My mind goes like... Puffy is a seme?! Wait! uke? What?! Seme! Wtf?!
Yuki Rivaille chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
GREAT DESU
XD
I never thought I could read some of them! Thank you for fanfiction garcias desu!
I hope to read more of your fanfiction with BartoLu o / w / o
Jaa ne!