Love that this is a L/OC/Light pairing! I’ve never seen it before, and I’ve read many a Death Note stories. I also love how she is BB’s sister! Never have I seen that either! I appreciate how you fleshed out Beyond’s character and made him more human. (Ironic, obviously) I adore how he and Ever and such devoted siblings and look forward to reading more of their bond. The only thing I ask is that this doesn’t become political, indeed. Obviously it’s your story and you can do whatever you want. However, bringing real world politics and issues into a story instantly erases the magic and tends to make people mad and turn them off. Myself included, tbh. Other than that, I really enjoy literally everything else about this story and honestly don’t know why you don’t have far more readers! Keep it up!

Thank you for writing this. I havent been personally affected by this problem though I cry just at the memory of the videos, the screams and cries, the concern and shouts of the people around and at the top of that, the faces of this supposed believers of justice who really don't care. I know we humans can change, I just hope it to happen fast.

Spent 2 days reading whenever I had the chance.

Oh my goodness I love this so much! I came back after a year or so, and it was just as amazing the second time (or was it the 3rd? 4th?)! I absolutely love how you’ve written Endo— so amazingly original! I know life happens and you’ve got to do you, but I seriously hope one day you’ll return back to this! If so, I’ll eagerly jump up and down and read away! Thanks for the awesome story!

Is this discontinued? It’s been almost a year

This is really good! I've always tried to find a fanfic where B's story is better portrayed, and his eyes better explained. Not to mention, you've made Everest such a likable, yet unknowable wild card without her being over-powered. It really is amazing!

love it

Been a while! Can't wait for the next chapter!

I'm loving this! Of course L takes what she said so personally. I believe that when E said she didn't view him as a man, she wasn't talking romantically. I believe that [like in this conversation] she tends to forget that L is a flawed human. He did imply something sexist, so of course she would remember just how flawed he is despite what he represents. As you pointed out, while L as an entity may be the greatest detective in the world, L Lawliet is a vulnerable and flawed human being.

AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

I LOVE IT!

YOU'RE AWESOME!

This line is perfect!

“After all, our reproduction discussion had consisted of Roger giving an anatomy lesson and declaring that this was a home for gifted children, not a rabbit farm.”

I’m laughing so hard!~

Can't wait for more!

love it

It's like I'm watching a basketball game, waiting for what the other will say (L and E), then another player comes in (Light). I'm so curious as to what E will respond to his question - how she'll word it. love this story so much, thank you for the chapter.

Last chapter was good, as was this one, thanks for writing this. I'm getting excited what you're gonna do next regards Ever, is she gonna act more and remind L of BB?.
*Last scene with L and E* ~ooh, Tension..
See you next chapter!