Paragraph two is the biggest duck you moment in ponyville history.

And this is the story of how Celesta and Luna adopt a changeling

Just like Cadence and Shining Armor all over again! I love it! TRUE LOVE RULES ETERNAL!

Wow Twilight. Just wow. (Pure sarcasm.) CANT YOU LET SOMEONE WHOS CLEARLY TRYING TO GET A NEW LIFE GET ONE! FOR THE LOVE OF GOD! But this is a really good story. I’m just ranting about Twilight because I haven’t watched the show in a while so I think she’s kinda overrated now.

Chrysalis is the worst parent in history

I really like this story, but it irks me with all the spelling mistakes and inconsistency in tense. If you wish, I can revise everything and send you a good copy of the story, where the errors will be fixed and a little more description/detail is added in to make the sentences flow. Please PM me with your answer.
~ Gracie_Ghost

That was cute, a tiny bit Mary Sue, but still it was cute.

this is the best romance ever and you said u wasn't that good.

damn

lol

lovee this story. I love the romance. and I like changling's I hope u make new story's

OMG THIS IS AWESOME

Great piece of literature, The OC was really original to me.

MLPChan (Guest):

I am sorry, but i have no plans on a sequel.

Yay! Awesome fic! Sequel? Please? Pretty please?