YES! XDXDXDXD I'm so happy at Sari and TFA Bumblebee are together. OvO

Well I saw this coming

I can't find Episode 4 in your collection of stories, but I'll look again. This is getting to be pretty awesome!

Hello, just wanted to ask you if I can use Miko's host parents names for my fict TechnoEarth, please.

it wont work with the sent thing june is not techno-organic the other half of the samples are in a bin on TFA cybertron the pred cant sniff her out like that

I listen to the transformers prime theme before each episode

Fire breathing robot dinosaurs :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)

Well, I don't know what to say except great episode. Of course you showed me the drafts before posting it all up, so I can't complain. I'm just hoping what the next episode is going to be like, not to mention that I have some other ideas to share with you in private.

Keep on writing.

Ah, MECH. When will you stop making the very weapons of your destruction? Probably never. :) Can't wait for the next episode!

read through the first two eps and up to chapter 16 of ep.3 (pretty much all within one night). Thought it was pretty good so far, but loving it now that you've got Miko going predacon/technorganic.

I know Arcee and Jack are an item (pretty common in TF:Prime fanfics, especially if its a human-former or one of the Jack-becomes a TF type themes), but not everyone writes about (or a lot of/for) Miko.

Having Miko go dragon-predacon makes sense. She's kind of hyper and act-first-without-full-thought type person.

So far you've had Predaking killed/blown-up/whatever some what, three times? Is he going to eventually go sentient? If he does, will he gain partial control over Miko? Or will she use her "feminine side" to sway control of him away from Megatron.

I'm also curious about how you'll handle the Miko/Bulkhead relationship in upcoming chapters. On the one hand, they really like each other, but on the other, she's a Predacon... her armor is 1/10th as thick yet stronger than Bulk's armor, and she's probably as strong if not stronger, so her being with him could be dangerous for Bulk (who, out of the pairing, is now the "more easily damaged/offlined"). You'd probably be best going with the second or third idea below, cause otherwise you might find an overly-excited Miko-dragon giving Bulkhead a bear-hug (dragon-hug) and accidentally hurting him (by crushing him with predacon strength).

I do however see a few possibilites. Bulkhead could get scratched and (after being "cured") as Miko was, be with her be with her on a predacon-with-predacon level.
Or maybe Shockwave will release a mini-version of Predaking who becomes sentient, and after she falls for him (or falls under his control) she ends up freeing herself and him from Shockwave (sort of a "power of love" slash "love triumphs over evil" situation).
Or perhaps best yet, maybe Shockwave could find/capture a teen human male and scratch the human with a predacon bone to make a male version of Miko who is loyal to the Decepticons. Going with this option gives you the most control, since you can invent a character. Perhaps the guy could be a loner who has/had a partial crush on Miko but was too nervous to apprach her. Or maybe Shockwave found him through the internet cause he's a loner and a fan of dragons and makes a somewhat "willing" canadate to become one. ("power of love" once again. Unless you want to get dirty with the idea, in which case it would be more the "power of lust and hormones"... which might require a shift to an R-level rating)

Miko's sort of dark for an Autobot/Predacon/Dragon (black with pink and purple highlights) so you could play a potential opposite for her male counterpart (red with gold and black highlights), or if you just want to keep the main color dark, he could be black with red and gold highlights). Would to a degree make sense to make him the brighter of the pair (in nature on Earth, the male is usually the more colorful, as a means to attract a female mate).

I do have a design in mind if you're interested (private mail me). I often roleplay it (I've made a few of my own dragon plushies, this one being one, so I can even provide pictures and/or a fair bit of descripton, including some unique bits (feathered wings... with feathers that can be thrown-off or thrown-out like daggers. Few feathers on the head and at the tail-tip also. Tail can do the feather-dagger thing too). well, okay, technically he's a draenix, a dragon-phoenix hybrid, but I'll leave full control up to you. I'd just be honored if you used him.)

I would like to see something done with the transmetels and the fuzors from BEAST WARS. Maybe Rafael gets turned into a transmetel raccoon or bee.

Whoops. I posted a review and said you could PM me, but wasn't logged in, and left a different name as who was doing the post. So, RapierDragon, aka .5

Great Job! Love this series!

I like how you didn't forget about Vince and his gang.

is unit:E going to create real battle suit armor based on technorganic data?

Where's airachnid and blackaracina in this