This should be continued!

This is actually really good. I enjoyed the read. I wish there were more chapters, the story seems to have the potential to really go somewhere. I'd like to see where it goes.
Keep up the good work!

so, i guess this is not going to be updated - like ever.
i really like it and the plot seems extremely original and interesting, it surely could have been a great story!
think about it ;)

I have to say, this is by far one of the most interestimg plots. I would love it if you continued this. Great story

I LOVE IT! KYAAAAA.

This seems really interesting from the regular fics, def a twist. Keep writing!

Holy smokes! Okay, for starters this is a kick-ass plot! I don't think I've ever read anything like it. The characters seem like themselves and react how I picture they would. No grammar errors from what I can see. I can't wait to read more. Thank you for the awesome read.

Holy shit, this is good