This was actually a very good read. :D

Though I do have one little thing to point out.

Lady Xiahou Hui ("Huishi" as I like to call her) found out that Sima Shi didn't plan to stay loyal to the Cao family of Wei, and their relationship worsened. She was poisoned, and it was rumored that Sima Shi himself was the culprit.

Later on, after Sima Yan established the Jin Dynasty, Sima Shi's 3rd wife & widow Yang Huiyu (older sister of Yang Hu) convinced Sima Yan to posthumously honor the late Huishi as "Empress Jinghuai".

I thought Lady Wu was Sub Jian's wife?

This story is so adorable!

I know this story finished a while ago, so I'm not sure if you'll see this or not. I've read a bunch of your stories, but I've never reviewed any of them and I'm sorry for that. I think you have an amazing talent for writing, its no exaggeration when I say that you can write better than some paid authors. Please continue to write.

and i was waiting for their kissing moment... it's still a nice fanfic though. An absolutely really nice dynasty warriors fanfic.

Please make another DW fanfic please...

A nice fic. But I wast lay prefer shixyuanji so I hope his wife is not added.

Aww...In spite of his indifference attitude, Sima Shi is such a sweet husband to Hui. It would be great if Hui was really added into the games and the interaction between the husband and wife is as stated by you. Good job, you wrote very well!

Great work.
Can't wait to read more of your updates..

I think this story is wonderful so far.

Xiahou Hui has always intrigued me as a historical figure, and I'm so happy to see that someone is writing about her. She is a strong but loyal woman, and a person on her own. By far the plot and use of the characters is done very well-I especially love the subtle care Shi gives to his wife.

I can't wait to read more! :DD

Nice job. Can't wait till the next chapter come!

My! I've been absent from fanfiction for too long,anyways this is a nice and interesting story! Length is superb because I am greedy and adore loonf chapters, your writing style is simplistic but elegant? If that's the right way to say it? It works well and makes me want to read more! The oc is not a generic 'I'm a badass betch love mehh' or the typical and way overdone 'x I wuv ewe' kinda character so plus for you! Also using Xiahou Hui...I forsee a up the great work! 'ω'
-Ryujin Mei ( who is lazy too log in but I've given my account to a friend so yah)

I don't know what else to say but good job! Nothing you need to work on so far.

Great work. Cheers for no grammatical and spelling errors. I'm really interested to see where this is going. Keep it up! :)