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Natlia chapter 28 . 11/16/2018
To be continued ️
Guest chapter 27 . 8/18/2017
Comparing this chapter to the first few you can tel how much your writing has improved. Your sentence structure as well as spelling has had a masssive important. I encourage you to keep writing to see how much better you can become
Guest chapter 27 . 12/13/2016
Its great old upd8 soon
When r u going 2 tell stiles about his dad
Guest chapter 8 . 11/26/2015
Your story is good. I really like the plot. Just practice your grammar. For example, i should be I.
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 26 . 1/25/2015
Love this awesome story so far written really well I'm nervousness for him to find out about his dad
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 25 . 1/25/2015
Oh my goodness this story breakers my heart but it's awesome
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 19 . 1/25/2015
Oh my goodness so sad
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 11 . 1/25/2015
I feel so bad for him
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 5 . 1/25/2015
Oh my goodness I hate then so much write now
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 1 . 1/25/2015
Idiots freaking idiots
fangirldisaster chapter 25 . 12/12/2014
Love your story! Update soon please (:
Person chapter 6 . 11/23/2014
Okay, good plotline, but you really need to edit better. Maybe ask a friend to proof read? IDK it's up to you.
Guest chapter 9 . 11/8/2014
ERGHHHH ITS I'M OR I AM NOT FUCKING AM NOt hunger! Wtf dude its hungry learn how to fucking write. Good ass plot but its to hard to read
So many typos chapter 5 . 10/18/2014
You have a crazy amount of typos. You keep saying. 'am' with out the word 'I' in front and it makes zero sense. Learn English before writing in the language.
Transition88 chapter 23 . 10/14/2014
I really like the plot, and feel like the story has a lot of potential. However, there are many spelling/grammar errors that make things difficult to understand. I recommend getting a beta, there are many on this site.
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