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Natlia chapter 28 . 11/16/2018 To be continued ️ |
Guest chapter 27 . 8/18/2017 Comparing this chapter to the first few you can tel how much your writing has improved. Your sentence structure as well as spelling has had a masssive important. I encourage you to keep writing to see how much better you can become |
Guest chapter 27 . 12/13/2016 Its great old upd8 soon When r u going 2 tell stiles about his dad |
Guest chapter 8 . 11/26/2015 Your story is good. I really like the plot. Just practice your grammar. For example, i should be I. |
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 26 . 1/25/2015 Love this awesome story so far written really well I'm nervousness for him to find out about his dad |
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 25 . 1/25/2015 Oh my goodness this story breakers my heart but it's awesome |
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 19 . 1/25/2015 Oh my goodness so sad |
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 11 . 1/25/2015 I feel so bad for him |
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 5 . 1/25/2015 Oh my goodness I hate then so much write now |
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 1 . 1/25/2015 Idiots freaking idiots |
fangirldisaster chapter 25 . 12/12/2014 Love your story! Update soon please (: |
Person chapter 6 . 11/23/2014 Okay, good plotline, but you really need to edit better. Maybe ask a friend to proof read? IDK it's up to you. |
Guest chapter 9 . 11/8/2014 ERGHHHH ITS I'M OR I AM NOT FUCKING AM NOt hunger! Wtf dude its hungry learn how to fucking write. Good ass plot but its to hard to read |
So many typos chapter 5 . 10/18/2014 You have a crazy amount of typos. You keep saying. 'am' with out the word 'I' in front and it makes zero sense. Learn English before writing in the language. |
Transition88 chapter 23 . 10/14/2014 I really like the plot, and feel like the story has a lot of potential. However, there are many spelling/grammar errors that make things difficult to understand. I recommend getting a beta, there are many on this site. |