This is a very impressive story. The plot idea is amazing, and your writing is able too keep the readers attention. Take your time, and a work the story to how you see fit. Just please be sure to see this story to the end. Keep up the good work.

I really appreciate that you care enough about your stories to take the time to think it out more and regardless of any perceived faults you've found I've really enjoyed reading thus far. This idea of mako being the dark avatar was one I've had floating around in my head since we were introduced to the concept. While I realize you're probably still working hard on ironing out the kinks to any future updates I would personally appreciate you posting perhaps an authors note to show use your progress or for the purpose of bouncing some idea off of use.

Sincerely,
An appreciator of good fanfics

I know you said you needed to go on a hiatus to figure this out, and I can appreciate you caring enough about your work to do that, however in the meantime if you can post an authors note to maybe show us some of the progress you've made or even just to bounce some ideas off of us I would appreciate it.

Well - if you figure it out - I'd definitely read more.

Please update this now! This is exactly how I wanted season 2 to end

I hope you update soon. I would love to see what happens next!

interesting story can't wait what else comes

I've been wondering about one like this. It seems interesting so far.

Yay, an update! I think (i don't know, my personal opinion) is to focus a bit on present mako because I'm slightly confused on where he is, your writing is great :D

I love this! When are you going to continue? 3

Yes love it 3 You're a talented writer! Please update soon :D