The way this is written makes it seem like you are reading a summary instead of reading things as they happen. I could only make it to chapter four. The dialogue is rushed. This fanfic seems rushed. The concept is kinda confusing. Is Harry the winter soldier? Is the winter soldier Harry's dad? What happened to the avengers? As I was reading was asking more questions and not getting many answers. I'd give this fanfic a three outta ten. I have read worse. I have most definitely read better.

Not quite as bad as the Dursley's but not the best mother either. This looks good so far and I hope it continues. Well, this is another of those the magical world threw Harry away stories. Only this time it was his own mother who did it!

Wow, your age shows. This is a juvenile piece of...something. Nope.

Pigfarts is on the moon. not in Scotland. an honest mistake, not to worry

Sorry but when you took a very hard left into Thanos you totally lost me. Until then I found it intriguing although throwing Andea into the story was a little perplexing. I think if you had stuck with the core group of kids it would have been fine. The original premise is very interesting but then you added in a little of this and a little of that and it stopped making any sense.

so... is harry the winter soldier... or is his dad? im confused.

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It's 7 not 6 ... with potter 8 so he had it wrong when he said that it's not 7 anymore...

Bucky should point out to Daphne that unlike HER, HES known Lfoter for YEARS, so whys is it any of her business to be 'correcting' him about his BEST FRIENDS (for all she knows *lol*) name when he says it wrong or calls him something else like 'Fred'? *lol*

train wreck.

Mixed tenses, even within the same sentence. Not even going to go into the inane plot line.

Confused is Bucky going to date and marry hermione and Andrea. Also he was once Thanatos um... okay

Why would they need wands when they clearly already go to magical school. He's being asked about hurls in charms class etc. so he already has a magical focus. And as they are magical he should of been blood adopted by his new parents. So he'd have four parents not just two. But his name should legally and magically be James not Harry.

I'm confused is his name James Jr. or Damian because it says both

Hope you start the next story soon, I'm looking toward to it. Otherwise love this, brilliant plot twist!

That cough tho made me laugh at his failed attempt to be evil

I am honestly the most confused about this story. I can't keep up with all these Avengers children or their roles/powers. Who the hell is the Winter Frost? Who did all the original Avengers marry and why are they letting their kids fight in dangerous situations? What was up with the arm thing? Why did Voldie aim for Harry's arm instead of his neck? Your explanation for this plothole was lacking. What was up with the needle melting thing? Did the open end of Harry's arm just miraculously heal without any sort of "impossible" aid? Why wouldn't the orphanage give Harry a name? The Barnes family could have easily changed it. Did Lily just expect to get her son back after abandoning him? What was that tripe James spouted? Love your action scenes. Completely confused, though, about where the next gen Avengers came from. It's a cool concept but springing them all like that in the fast paced action scene, I didn't know who was who and what they could do. And what the hell was James/Harry's mom thinking when she just suddenly agreed with Dumbledore and adding the other children into the mix? Dumbledore literally just kidnapped their children all because they saved lives! And Dumbledore! What type of dressing down was he going to give Harry for saving lives, especially Alicia's? What type of explanation was that "the god of magic gave them magical cores? What an inefficient way of covering a plothole. I mean just make it a coincidence that they were all muggleborns or saying that they came from a squib line or something. And that cafe scene was confusing as hell. I had to write down all the characters name to get even a semblance of how many there are and what they can do. You haven't even introduced the older Avengers and I know I was confused as hell from I read Iron Maiden because I had no idea what was going on. You should have put up a warning. The wand shop scene was unnecessary. Why did we need to know all their wands? The Gringotts th ing confused me also. How did Mrs Barnes get the key to Ravenclaw's vault? And why was the sword talking? The random animals were weird. I don't think anybody can own a nundu or a Cerberus. Those are dangerous creatures.

All in all I like the concept but I think you should rework your story to cover all the plotholes. This wasn't meant to be a flame, and I wasn't trying to be mean. I've just pointed out all you can fix. Maybe I should have softened the words a little but this is how I like my criticism so... I'm sorry for being so harsh but this the reality. I like your story though, it just needs some tweaking.