Good story, but I have to say that killing off Miranda was a bad decision. Harry had the Elixier of Life and it’s completely out of character for him not to have it on him.
Endings were both really unsatisfying

I don't even know what's going on in this story. It's not well written, the sentence structure doesn't make sense. The concept is interesting, but the story is bad. All the characters are acting Oc.

The first chapter is utterly unoriginal except for James being the betrayer. You just changed the year and put Harry Potter in place of Tom Riddle. For god's sake even their wands are totally the same.

Hopefully chapter 2 brings in something interesting.

Huh. I know it's finished, but I can't help but think that Harry will come out on top in the end. After all, the prophecy can also be about him, what with being marked as the equal, power he knows not (love), born as the seventh month dies, if the author didn't change his birth date, though it's still in late summer

Good chap but it kinda rubbed me the wrong way that Harry went to gloat

Vamoooos que se alze el imperio mágico de Potter, que haga como Grindelwald y se alie con la europa mágica

One of the best Dark Harry stories. Thank you!

11 year-olds don't talk like that

Good job, you made two shit endings

Bonne chance not bon chance (sorry I automatically correct)

Harry followed Harry? How does one follow oneself?

Where’s Siri

The randomly capitalized words r weird, and the dialogue is occasionally unnatural. But other than that, so far so good.

How can you tell if an expression is fair

soo
great story
this is the second time i've read it and now i notice quite clear parallels between this and napoleons rises to power
i wont list the reasons for that here,
would love a sequel though i kinda doubt you will ever read this
which ending though
flip a coin though the civil war may be more interesting it would be sad to continue this story without harry
wiwerse windemer
signing out