Aroura, the most unique name for a Lucario ever

GIANT WALLS OF TEXT

please space out your stuff. it actually hurts my eyes lookinh

I like to say well done on completing this story.
Looking forward to the crossover story.
See you next time.
Over & out.

Awwww it's about to end? What about wolf going on to beat all the gyms and the pokemon league?

Oh. My gosh.
OH. MY. GODOHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD- YOU ACTUALLY DID IT AND IT'S SO FREAKING AMAZING!
I also love how Vile just CAN'T keep her mouth shut~
But honestly I NEVER THOUGHT YOU'D ACTUALLY DO IT AAAAAAAAAA-
Definitely ready for the final battle. THANKS-
Soldier Excellent, over and out.

The lemon was good. Fit well with their character's. Needs some touching on some spelling though. But it's fine.

When Merciless and Vile said they were mates, I just had THE URGE to say "Oh, so you're mates? Prove it and have fun right here, right now, like all mates should".

But seriously, I love this story, and it'd get even more interesting if Merciless and Vile HAD fun

Amazing work, keep it up!

Yeah I'm still here. Forgot to review though.

Omg. THE PLOT TWIST!

Yes. I can't wait for next chapter.

This chapter is so badass excellent! I like it so much as well. Keep up the good work and good luck on your training, dude. I hope the Qing would give you some extra strength and motivation too!

good chap.

i know right?

this story is great and i love how it's a low-key dbz crossover as the "magical orbs" are basicly dragonballs

Good chapter.