Soooo sweet!

I like it, even if I'm not used to read stories like this. Moreover, I will never understand why Vegeta and Bulma are so popular as a couple, I have a father whose personality is quite similar to Vegeta's, and that's not pleasant either for me nor for my mom, I promise.
PS: Besides, I don't like couples in which the woman is taller than the man, it's just my opinion.

This was without a doubt the sweetest story I've ever read~

Goku/Chi-Chi is my personal favorite, the are just such an adorable couple. The lemon you had in this chapter wasn't over the top, not in the least. Some people get WAY graphic, but this was nice. Good job!

i don't care for dbz

but this story is so loving and sexy

i give it 5 gold stars *****

well done!

really, really sweet :) keep up the good work!

That was so sweet and cute and asom and sweet (did I say that already?) and well writen and sweet and I cant think of anything else to say... and sweet... I think you get the idea -. That was really good and your a great writer (from what I've seen). Keep on truckin! I mean writing. Yeah, keep writing. So...um... yeah... SWEET!

Wow what a sweet and loving story. Goku and Chichi are my favourite couple ever and this was such a lovely fic! I loved it! Good work Angelhart!

awsome completely awsome... -

Cool story, so cool in fact I was wondering if you would mind if I shared it with some people I know?

That was so... Goku is just so innocent and cute, I think they should show more Goku/Chi Chi interaction in the show (maybe not intercourse-wise) but hey they're married they should act more loving toward each other (or at least chi chi should) she's always hitting him with her frying pan, hehe. I'm just a hopeless romantic, so my thoughts tend to stray to their relationships, sorry. I really liked this short story, it was sweet and so cute.

~Lee

Hi! I want to tell you how much I love your story. It's so sweet, so beautifully-written! I love this story, please make more Goku and Chi-Chi fics. They are my favorite couple. Luv this story!

Hoping for more G/CC fics,

Tonibelle

aww its so sweet

keep up the great work!

Got to go or else this will contian many many beautiful compliments by moi...

PEACE

GD

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I'm not sure If I've read this before or not. It was very sweet. Not an over the top lemon.

I guess I missed this one, but I must say, you did a wonderful job. Imagine, a Bulma/Vegeta fan who can write wonderful Goku/Chichi stories.

While I usually have something to say about grammar, because I know it annoys me when I find mistakes and nobody has told me about them, the only thing I can say is read over some of your sentences. You didn't always choose the right verb tense.

Your writing style, while it isn't easy to decipher in one short fic, is very nice, and developed.

Your first person interpertation of Chichi as a human being was very well done, and I congratulate you on that.

The lemon was pleasant to read, not overly graphic, and yet it got the point across.

Good job, and I hope to see more of your writing.

Bulma and Vegeta are my favorite couple too, but every once and a while it's nice to read a CC/G fic because they're just so sweet together. I really liked this one. It had just the right amount of lemon too. JA!