Oh my god! Fabulous.

Awesome job on this

I think you're wrong with not being happy about it. I think the way you describe the situation is perfect. I really, really like it!

Heya, darlin. I may go as Story, but I'm rubbish at coming up with them, so my idea for the gift fic didn't quite work out as well as planned (which is probably not too bad, since it occurred to me halfway through that I was writing for the only nuWho Doctor I couldn't remember you ever commenting on positively or negatively). So, I decided to give you a review instead...Like Kaz said, Kat. You're an absolutely wonderful girl, and you deserve the best. While I may not be the best you can get, I'll give the best I can give you at the moment. Hope it's worth it, dear (despite the fact that I'm reviewing for a canon I'm half blind to and not overly fond of.)

So. Wowzah.

First thing I notice is the little details you put in there. I like how he's finally feeling content now with his arms around her, here at the end, knowing that all these terrible things have happened. It really does show how much they care for each other, that even with the world having essentially reached the apocalypse around them, he can still feel perfectly fulfilled because he's holding her.

Also, I'm rather liking the minor detail of hearing her future change. It's a tiny detail, but I like that you put it in there to add that extra sense to the story so it's not purely visual.

Oh, of course Yuno stabs herself. Child, did no one tell you that future diaries and horoscopes aren't always right?! Truly heartbreaking to think that she killed herself not only because she knew it would save Yuki, but also because it was the only way she thought she could. There had to have been another way, but because she wasn't sure and she didn't know, she sacrificed herself to something more certain. Even worse is that she's happy about this, because even though she's dying, Yuki will live. It's such a terrible, beautiful sacrifice, and it really brings out this shred of a humanity from the character that made me not like the canon. Very well done.

And it gets worse. Tragedy just leaks from this piece. After all they've been through, all he's given up, all he's lost, there's nothing but more to lose. What kind of world...He's supposed to have won, going strictly by the rules he has, but he has still lost in the worst way he ever could.

And no one even cares.

The way that he reaches for Yuno, studies her, tries to make sure he remembers her beauty and not her wounds just screams of their love for each other. Nice way to really punch it in again. And then this last line, of course, slams it home in this soul-shattering way. They spent so much time fighting to survive and save themselves and each other that they forgot the most important thing - to live and not just survive. And now that it's all said and done, it's too late for both of them to live, even though he's still alive. Absolutely heartbreaking.

You have absolutely lovely emotions in this, Kat. Your writing is amazing, and it just bleeds these wonderful, tragic, terrible, beautiful emotions, which is exactly what I look for in fandoms and writing. Absolutely amazing. LOVE IT! Thank you so much for posting and keep up the lovely work!

Kitt

I have feelz for daze right now. I don't think I have felt this depressed for a while

Hey, Vortex!

I've seen bits and pieces of 'Mirai Yukki' but I never got around to watching the whole thing. Still, this was a tragic look into Yuki's final moments with Yuno. Even if he didn't choose this future, it's hard for everyone when people decide to play God. Good job! :)

I like your version of the ending. Definitely a lot more detailed than the anime's ending. Poor Yuki never got to see the stars with her-or anybody really. One complaint I have is that shouldn't Yuno's future diary say stuff about Yuki. It shouldn't say how she feels.