| Reviews for Belonging To The Fog |
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Guest chapter 32 . 6/15 It's quite long since last time you updated. I can't helped to falling for your story. Hope they both get an happy ending. |
Almecestris chapter 32 . 5/21 I was holding myself back from reading this until it's completed because I know my poor, poor heart can't take it. AND IT REALLY CAN'T. I swear this is one of the most heart-wrenching Lumione fics I've ever read. Characterization is brilliant. Writing is brilliant. ALL OF IT IS FREAKING BRILLIANT. I LOVE THIS AND I THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS STORY (MORE PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD). |
Kerla chapter 32 . 5/18 Oh dear, I walked right into this pickle on my own by breaking my rule of not reading a WIP. But I must say, it's been a really interesting story to read, with how it started out and how the plot has built up. Well written, with clues that unfurl later on. I cant't wait for more. I've never really shipped Lumione before, but I might just start after this story. |
annapsarudaki chapter 32 . 4/3 Hello! I was so excited to find the notification of this update on my newsfeed upon getting my laptop back! Wow, what a cruel place to cut it off! The Woman in rage was mega! So finally we find out why she had it out for Lucius. What extreme cruelty to kill her own sister! I can't believe she tortured her with dreams of Draco too! What a dramatic wake-up call for Hermione! I love how you described that she is aware of the fact that she will lose the Alice identity now. I bet that for all the terrifying world she was living in that seemingly made no sense to her, partially it was comforting to be "Alice". Let's see how she will handle things when she learns the truth... I feel so sorry about Lucius. She didn't just take revenge, she gutted the poor guy! |
Vane3131 chapter 32 . 3/30 Well shit this is amazing! |
pgoodrichboggs chapter 32 . 3/25 Amazing as always! I hope that perhaps with her memories back that Hermione will remember her magic and strike back at Bellatrix, mwahaha! |
NeoQBirdie chapter 32 . 3/25 Thank you for this lovely update. I reread the entire fic before continuing this chapter, and just adore it all. Thanks for entertaining us during the self isolation and social distancing. |
Honoria Granger chapter 32 . 3/25 I have just binged on this. What an extraordinary, beautifully written story. Absolutely immaculate, too: I found three grammatical errors and no misspellings I can recall in the whole thing. All praise to you and your beta, both of you supremely competent. Thank you for this lovely, harrowing tale.i shall look forward to its completion. |
MsSloan91 chapter 32 . 3/20 Ooooh what a cliffhanger! *screaming and shouting out loud* Lucius is incredibly invisible and quiet in this chapter, perhaps just as hopeless as we are! I doubt Hermione will deal with her past memories with Lucius gentlyomg I can’t watch if she leaves Lucius or sends him back to court...yet I’m so intrigued by it... |
Aid4 chapter 32 . 3/20 Hi! Thanks so much for this chapter! I love it! So is it Bellatrix, I really hope that Hermione and Lucius can escape of her hands in the end, that they can be a team a kill her and have the opportunity to have a future! Wooow Bellatrix really is crazy and intelligent, she really thought in everything and she is being so cruel but I really hope that Lucius and Hermione can make it together! Hope that you are well and taking care of yourself and your love ones! Keep safe! |
Charlie0O chapter 32 . 3/16 Oh, really? Since I saw the update I've been waiting for a moment of peace to be able to truly enjoy it, I love your story, your style, your characters, everything, so of course I loved this chapter as well, but to leave it there, hanging... It's going to be a long wait until the next one, so, no pressure, but please, give us something soon! Anyway, to not end this review complaining, let me thank you once more for all the hard work you are putting into this. Hope to read more from you soon! |
Figsy chapter 32 . 3/15 What a great comeback chapter! Maybe the self quarentine is good for something after all |
Lucyole chapter 32 . 3/15 Oh man you build up the drama and leaves us hanging on every word what might become of them and if they come out of it alive or not and now we aren't sure if her feelings for him will stay after her memories are returned really great love it. More please that would be great *cupcakes for inspiration and the great work* |
iram0123 chapter 32 . 3/15 I am really interested what happens next because you left such a cliff-hanger. I imagine that it won't be pretty when "Alice's" memories are fully back. This emotional torture is so realistic and I love it. |
Anon chapter 32 . 3/14 I have missed you. Hope you’ve been well. What a great chapter. This is the best thing to come out of all this covid bs. Thanks for writing! |