I looooove it!

That was good

aww this is really beautiful, it's really well written & done:D

That was just...amazing. (Plus, something from the Makado! I love that play.)This is definitely on of my favorite Truten fics. Great job.

Trunks and Goten are so cute together! I absolutely love this story!

aw!

thats soo sweet!

i like the fact that you made 'geta and goku open in their relationship. not many do that ya know.

im gonna go lood for more storys by you now!

*waves*

buhbye!

write some more pweeze! 0_0 K BYE!

Hehehe...
This was quite cute. It cracked me up, especially with quotes like "Thar she blows", which for some reason was hilarious, and "boinking Piccolo".
Boinking? Now that's just dirty...
Okay, that was funny as well. I greatly appreciate your writing style, and I find it refreshing, especially when now there's piles of crap here, and it's a struggle to find something decent with thought and heart put into it. But continue to write, and excuse me while I go read some more of your works.
Kate

wery interesting. needs a sequel

where's the rest? Good so far!

Love,

the one and only

OoshatiElf

you are the most awsome writter ever so

if you dont write more i'll track your ass down and beat you

with love z

please do write more detectives are expensive .

Good Job! The thought of Trunks and Goten in kimonos, singing, is just too good! I love the ending!

-aqua_illusion

that was a asome story i love Trunks/Goten Goku/Vejita storys and i got two for the price of one nice write more fics soon.

I really loved it! Kinda sudden and unexpecting-okay-I expected it, but still, it was very good! *sniffle* so sweet too *sniffle*

You write very good! Also, I must know; how do you know Japanese? I know some, but not that much...Anyways, my point was; I LOVE THIS STORY _~

~Cecilia

I love this fic. Yes indeedy I do. *heart*