Absolutely love this story! I was wondering if you were done writing it or were if you ever going to update again? It's honestly one of my favorites, so much so that I come back to it a couple times a year just to experience superb writing and story telling again. You and this story were also the only reason I went back to watch supernatural since middle school, just to brush up on these characters. Also got my aunt into it as well! I really LOVE LOVE LOVE your take on Hermione and her struggles because it raw and realistic and pretty fresh compared to some stories where she falls for her one true love by chapter 3 with no build up. As a woman who stuggles in her daily, I find her totally relatable and refreshing. Either way, know that you have a fan that constantly checks for updates just incase my favorite/follow notification isn't working

Such a wonderful story! I hope you come back to it one day. Thanks for sharing it!

omg this a perfect! ! please please pick up the pieces and find your muse. this story is awsome
virtul hugs.

Hoo, what a cliffhanger to end on! How mean. I really enjoyed reading this fanfiction even if I'm a bit late to it. Your portayal of Hermoine is always interesting in your stories and I very much enjoy the consistently good quality of your writing. I did notice that you sometimes leave words out of a sentence here or there. Nothing bad, since it's easy to mentally fill in the correct word, so it doesn't really hinder the reading flow. Though I would encourage to read over your chapters with an eye out for it. As I said, nothing that actually bothers me and probably won't bother other readers, just an observation.

But man! I do enjoy the crossover setting you created. The idea with the veil isn't necessarily new or unique for HP crossovers, but I liked the twist of why exactly it leads to the Supernatural world and why Hermoine was the first to end up there. Also, love all the reformed younger generation Death Eaters. It makes sense they would change their tune when forced to live Muggle themselves in a world with no other natural magicals.

And I very much enjoyed Hermoine's romantic forays. I am partial to a little bit of smut here or there. Though in the beginning I was majorly surprised and a bit put out by Sam's forwardness in that regard. It seemed out of character. But in the end, I grew to appreciate it, since you were constant with that side of your characterization and actually made it into a plot point. And, can I just say that I both expected the pregnancy and was utterly shocked at the miscarriage. That was just brutal. For both your poor shipping readers and your poor main characters. I approve completely. Made more sense for continuing the plot as is anyway.

So, uh, yeah, I love your writing. Thank you for sharing it with us.

It's perhaps a good thing this story was abandoned. There are a few logical consistency errors in here, and chief among them is Hermione gaining her magic and...simply not using it when faced with a demon. Hermione, who, in the Potter canon, is the major magic buff. Nor does she show any Hermione-esque traits when she retains her magical skills, such as, say, going through every spell she knows to see if they still work. By the time she fell through the veil, she could produce a Patronus, for example. Would that not help against demons?

I suppose we won't find out!

This needs a rewrite. Poison Apple is great, because it explains very well how Hermoine is different and developes differently. This story doesn't, and given this is canon Hermione til the DoM, suffice to say, at this point it is rather jarring.

Great story!

I hope you finish this someday. I love crossovers and yours is too good not to finish.

This was sooooo gooood I’m so sad that you stopped! Especially on a cliffhanger

I know it's been awhile since you've updated, this is also the fourth time I read the story I just want to say I hope one day you Revisit this because it's actually quite a work of art. I enjoy the plot, the fact that the veil leads somewhere other than nothing is as it amazing idea and the fact you weaved it so seamlessly with the supernatural universe is amazing. I always enjoy the story, your other works are just as awesome as well - I mean this is a seamless read, I don't get hung up on grammar, everything flows so beautifully it could be a novel and I would totally pay for it. So please when you're feeling inspired revisit the story add to it because this Cliffhanger is killing me

I've finally had time to read this whole story through and I'm very sad that you haven't updated it for a long time. I am enjoying your poisoned apple story and I hope you get inspiration to continue this fiction as well.

Yo this is so good. I just cannot put it down . Keep on writing. You’re really good.

update pls

so i just finished season five will the story keep focus on hermione or will it head back into cannon territory?

Wow...just wow..
I’ve been reading your story “poison apple” and love it so much that I decided to read your other fics as well and I am OBSESSED! I love the hermione/Sam scenes along with the Draco/Hermione. And I simply cannot find another supernatural/Harry Potter doc that I love so much (If you have any suggestions please send them my way haha) I know it’s been years but I still have hope that this story will be finished. Keep up the amazing work!

Well, no updates for a few years, which is a bit upsetting. This is a really good fic! One of the better Harry Potter/Supernatural fics out there I think. I'd love for you to return to this eventually, but I understand if you don't. Plus- you've got Poisoned Apple now, which is a fantastic story as well.

-BusFullOfLlamas