awesome story, Loved it

very lovely...can't wait for more stories from you...

Beautiful Jessie! I've always hoped someone would do a OS to this scene. Great job!

Lovely

Jessie! This was so cute and so well written! I love when Nathan calls Haley a goof! It's adorable and she so is! And he loves that about her! You wrote that scene so well of them just hanging out waiting for the license! Ugh you better write another story!

And of course, it's AMAZING ... as I knew it would be! For your first FF, this is excellent! Great scene to pull from too! You're a good writer. Believe that! You are so good at expressing your thoughts. I read this thinking she must have a very clear vision of what she sees and you translated it so well. I'm jealous ... truly! Keep it up, girl. I hope you continue to write. I think you would be crazy not to :)

I loved it! You did an amazing job!

Jessie! Omg dude.. I don't even think you realized that I wanted to see flashbacks of that and now that you did this, I somewhat have them! You surprised me and in the best way possible! I'm so excited for you love! You made my Naley loving heart so happy!

Huh, this is good! Superb imagery and mood. Rock on!