good story

Absolutely fantastic, thank you!

Nice one...your stories are well written. The pace is perfect and the story engaging and exciting. Well done again!

Please add more to this if you can I'd love it! It could be an early bday present or something just think about it! But other than that this is great!

Damn.

What happens to Tony?

This is great, but please write more. I can't wait to see what happens next. (This is so much better than the miracle recovery in the real episode.g) Thank you for sharing.

I like your version much better than what they gave us in the show. They brushed off McGee's injury as a scratch, and never addressed that he stayed to get hat info. from his computer. Thanks for this! :o) DA

please continue...if you need an idea...gibbs point of view from before the blast to the point where mcgee gives him the flashdrive...and maybe the next chapter gibbs talking to director vance.

More please very interesting

This is really good. Thanks for sharing!

This really good! Wish they would do something like this in the actual show instead of always ignoring Mcgees injurys in the end. Like this and then again when he gets hit with a golf club. Their just like oh give it a min and then bam he's fine. It's irritating, so coming on here and seeing stuff like this is nice. So thank you so much!

McGee!

I really like this. I couldn't believe the writers glossed over everyone's injuries, so I read all the fanfiction I can find to round it out. Thanks for posting.

AW!

I never did like the way they wrote McGees storyline in that episode. This is much better. I hope you do choose to continue it.