okay. I don't like how easily Lucy gives up. and I don't like that her spirits never showed up to help herwhat's the point of Loke being able to sense her emotions and open his own gate if he can't help her through a panic attack?but other than those two things, I really like this. I like the Lisanna/Lucy brotp stuff, I like Natsu's confession (though him showing up after the party is yet more proof that she gave up too fast), and I LOVE the "I've got her" exchange for some reason idk dude it hits me right in the feels.
just like. it makes me cry every time I read it and god knows I've read it more than once at this point. thank you so much for sharing this with us!

I CRIED!? lol

aww it made me cry I love it
should probs be rated M for the graphic depictions of suicide tho
nonetheless, thank you for sharing this with us!

Pls continue writing! I like the idea of Lissana and Lucy being friends and it being done well.

P.s. you pulled it off well

This was so beautiful. I was listening to the song Masquerade by Jonathan Thulin while reading this and with the beauty of the writing and that song, I was moved to tears with this story. Thank you

Thank you for this fic, it's nice to read a fic where lissana isn't a bitch

THANK YOU! SOME ONE WHO DOESNT MAKE LISANNA BITCHANNA

This was well written and I like that lisanna was the one to help Lucy but how you wrote the suicidal thoughts was a bit off. It takes a long time for people to get to that place and it seemed a little rushed. Other than that thought, it was awesome, good job!

This is the best story like this I have read. Good job.

This was really sweet. I liked it.

Beautiful! A sweet and realistic portrayal of the two of them. It really warms my heart.

hate how people villianize Lisanna. She is a nice girl and should be portrayed as such! I feel that she and Lucy have the potential to be best buds, I mean, they are similar, yet so different. Lis feels more soft, and Luce is fiery. They'd get along so well.

It's nice to find a story where Lisanna is a nice person. Though the only thing I'll criticize here is how you portray Lucy. She is not that fragile and weak to loose into depression and even become suicidal. I notice most stories make her into that kind of person. She is NEVER like that.

this made me cry omg i loved this

thanks for not making lisanna a bitch, i really like this fanficbut if you redo it make lucy stronger, coz you make her sound weak

It's not Natsu's fault that Lucy's a little emo shit and immediately gave up on life because she wasn't the center of attention. Jesus this story is dumb.