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That sounded really interesting I wish I was able to see this story completely written. Sorry you didn't want to finish it, but I just hope you completely finish Rinjibu on the Fallout

Wonderful. Another great story in progress discontinued. It's not that I don't like the summarization, I greatly feel that it would be better if it were a full story. But, seeing how it's your decision, I won't judge. Although, I would be willing to adopt this story and finish it off with your permission.

I will be honest, I like this story, but I felt it advances a little slowly, while is fine to build up the plot, you should try to get more faster to the point.

In thr synopsys a 'junior game developer' is mentioned, yet as the 7 chapter he still had not appeared, so as I said, you dragged a bit the past chapters.

So, i will look forward to see how Kobato and that game developer interact and build a relation with each other.

So please, continue this good story.

This is looking good. Keep it up.

You didn't write rika right, she speaks about herself in 3rd person... A massive part of her character...

Is this the last chapter? Please make more these are so good!