Nice story. Please continue writing Scömìche fics, please!

Yikes. That scene between Scott and Kirstie was intense. But at least Scott apologized. That's always a good thing to do.
Hold on a second, is that it? Where's the rest of the story? You need to patch things up between Scott and Kirstie. YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE!

I cannot wait until the next part of this series! I adore your writing!