| Reviews for The Witch and the Spare |
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DarkSecretWaterbender chapter 1 . 6/29 This is great! |
AU Over Canon chapter 1 . 11/10/2018 INTERIOR. OLD NURSERY OF ARENDELLE "One has long strawberry blonde hair was Normal, Ordinary Princess Anna of Arendelle and the other long has platinum blonde hair was Frost, Ice Snowflake Princess Elsa of Arendelle." "They've already grown up to be a classical tale of two long lost royal crown princess sisters of Arendelle since the fateful childhood accident happened that night back when Anna was only five, whereas, Elsa was only eight back then." "Elsa's twenty one, whereas, Anna's eighteen." "Poor royal of Arendelle really miss their long lost daughters a lot." "I know, right?" |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2018 "Thawing her heart with magic love is easy..." Technically, it was Anna's act of true love saved her own life. Like you write in "The Brave One": "I never even considered love would thaw until Anna did!" I think you should fix that point... |
Rarity01 chapter 1 . 12/20/2016 I was rereading through your fan fictions today- I never was able to forget them after all these years. Thanks for writing! |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2016 I love how you did the parallels of the story so well and then brought it all together so flawlessly. |
Random Writer chapter 1 . 6/29/2016 I love the way that you not only repeated the same idea, but similar wording for both of them. It really connected everything. |
BooksAreMedicine chapter 1 . 12/13/2015 nicely done, good character exploration and development with just the right amount of humor |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/9/2015 the feels man, the goddamn feels |
Concolor44 chapter 1 . 3/24/2015 Beautifully, whimsically, truthfully done! This was a joy to read. |
RPGgirl514 chapter 1 . 8/11/2014 Ahh I lost it when Elsa said "Don't you know by now I would give up anything for you?" Nice job prodding my feels like that. Wonderful story. I giggled when Olaf spilled the beans just like that and when Anna had her little destructive tantrum in the chocolate shop. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/19/2014 Fantastic story. Simply fantastic. |
Tare-chan chapter 1 . 4/30/2014 Awww... Those things the sisters do for each other, reckless... But the outburst was very understandable. I really like how you put the situation was so similar, yet for different cause that also feel so similar. Nice fic :D |
BG-13 chapter 1 . 4/26/2014 Darn right! |
ptahaegyptus2 chapter 1 . 4/17/2014 Haha! Love how they defend each other! This was beautiful! You have a way of capturing the broken aspects of the sisterly dynamic so well! |
Loridhhp chapter 1 . 4/16/2014 What a wonderful little story! I loved Anna's chocolate shop meltdown and then Elsa's dealings with the possible trade partners. They each defended each other to people who just didn't get it. Elsa is not a witch and Anna is more than just the spare! Beautiful. |