Who adopted the story

Poor Severus. Hes going to be punished for 'touching' and impregnating the newly discovered 'daughter' of Voldemort, even though HE never even knew either existed until AFTER they showed up in Hogwarts. *lol* plus I bet he has an alibi for WHERE he was when he supposedly met her and got her pregnant. Probably still in the UK, and especially NOT having sex with a then 15-16 year old girl, if the years between her birth leading up to Teddy's birth are right. *lol* Severus himself would have been in his mid-20s back then.

Voldemort has 'agreed' that Rabastan can court her? Like its ALREADY been decided as if Ailana has no say in the matter of ACCEPTING Rabastan's courtship? They REALLY think that just because VOLDEMORT 'gave permission' somehow means the daughter he NEVER knew even existed is just going to go along with it, just because the 'father' who has NEVER been in HER 26 years of life thinks he can decide HER life for her now that hes 'found her'? They also seem to assume that shes AVAILABLE to get with Rabastan or ANYBODY else Voldemort THINKS he can 'chose' for her. I mean come on, unless those tests they did that showed who Teddys daddy is also showed Ailana's marital status, what makes them think shes even SINGLE and AVAILABLE to be courted by ANYBODY? Despite the test showing Severus being Teddys daddy, for all thet know she might ALREADY have a husband waiting back where ever she was teleported from waiting for his wife and stepson to come home.

Uh, Snape starting checking out Fem!Harry when the little girl was 13? I understand a young adolescent girl blushing around and being attracted to an older man but what was his excuse?

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Ignore this critique. I think I'm just venting. I work with 15-17 year-old teenagers, many of whom have some very heartbreaking histories of abuse and molestation. Protecting them from exploitation by adults is kind of a hot button of mine. All of the "romance" fanfics with young traumatized and vulnerable teenage girls hooking up with men as old as their fathers (or grandfathers in the case of Voldermort) tend to disturb me.

Fan FICTION. Not intended to be taken seriously. Deep breath in, deep breath out. Okay, next chapter...

Can you post it when someone adopts your story?

Interesting Story.

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

I hate 'the skank who lived' stories. Why turn a main character into a badly written Mary Sue?

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That is too bad as I am following many of your stories, but you must listen/follow your muses. Thank you for keeping these stories up even though they are no longer continuing and to tell us if they are adopted.

I hope you continue this story it's a fun read.

Will this ever have more to it? It's quite an interesting story.

Please you must update!

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