Very well written.

That's sweet but just the right amount . I love it. Keep going

(my applause) absolutely beautiful! wish it was longer though, dammit.

Once again, a tale in such good keeping with the original, so in character, and so full of angst. I really love this: "Her faith in the ideals of knighthood had helped rekindle his own desire to be a true knight. He wanted to tell her she was the closest thing to a true knight he'd ever met, but she would think he was mocking her." An excellent title, as well. Thanks for writing such quality fiction.

"Her faith in the ideals of knighthood had helped rekindle his own desire to be a true knight." I couldn't agree more! Lovely job! JS

Aww...so tragically sweet. Angst fer shizz.

lovely! wish there was more

Thanks for posting. This has a really unique style. Rock on!