Oh the chemistry between them is amazing. This third chapter... you wrote it to near perfection, perfect in terms of emotion and detail and agh I can't even describe it, and the only thing I will say that you could improve on is some grammar issues (switching between tenses and such). But that aside... I've read another of your Teddy/Dom stories, and I think you write them so beautifully. Please continue with this!

I'm in love with this story. Your writing is perfection. I've never even considered Teddy/Dom before, but you just made me love it. I hope you update soon!

Hi! I really like the story!... want to know what would happen next!

Oh this is very interesting! :)
I've never thought of Teddy going with Dom instead of Victoire, so this is very interesting...

This chapter was better than the last! I love how you write it in Teddy's POV- it's nice to know what he's thinking, as many people write in Dominique, Victoire's or in 3rd person. Keep writing!

Fourth, not 4th. Not a bad little fic. By the way, I don't knock fics for their pairings. If I don't like, I don't read. Keep writing

Thanks for posting. This has a really unique style. Rock on!

Absolutely love this! Completely agree with Teddy/Dominique- there isn't enough fics about them! Can't wait for the next chapters! Update soon! :)