Cute I wish it was a little longer but I really like it

Such a cute story, sensible written and true to the characters!

Awwwww! Awesome!

So like Deeks to ruin a Neric moment, just like Erid to ruin a Densi moment. Like it!-)

Aww! That was a cute moment between the two...Now I want to learn how to Tie a Tie ...maybe that would be a help for a guy that can't.

Gorgeous :) there's something about ties that manages to make sparks fly.
... and together they'd make a pretty creative kill team, that's one body no one would ever find. Well, no-one except Hetty...

That was adorable! Absolutely loved it! :D

No surprises, I loved this! So happy to read something more from you!

Oh my gosh, that's adorable. Exactly the fix I needed. Thanks. :)

Awwwwww! Everybody has been so focused on Deeks and Kensi, so I'm glad to see some more Neric around here!

Quite enjoyed this. Even though it's short it builds up the characters and creates a cute realistic scene. Great work.

Oooh, what happens next? I'd love a follow-up!

very cool
excellent & fabulous