Xelloss: Oh yes! I remember now! That kid doesn't like heights. You should do something about that before you ask me to baby-sit again.

House on Haunted Hill meets Slayers, right? Amusing. I'll begin by saying you certainly do have a knack for witty dialogue. It was quite surprising. The amount of humor in this story made it a very enjoyable read. There were a lot of memorable moments within this fan fiction. Out of all of them, the part with the health cookies was the best. I never thought of anything Lina wouldn’t enjoy eating and I suppose it would be something like that.

The scene where Lina ate Amelia’s clothes was also rather funny. Gourry’s sudden and unexpected declaration of Gaav being behind everything was another interesting moment. Incidentally, I enjoyed whenever he began thinking as his difficulties in cognition were done well. The invitation to Death Mansion itself was neat. For some reason, seeing death after billiards gave me a good laugh. Finally, the mace and vase shop was a nice play on words.

Overall, neat story. Great fun all the way through. Good work.

Take it easy.

Don’t quit writing.

OMG! That was so friggin' funny! ROFLMAO!

Overall great story. Very hilarious. I'm glad Gourry didn't die. I was like NO! o as I said I'm really glad. Great Job and hope to see more slayerfics from you in the future.

These are seriously getting funnier by the chapter. The healh cookie bit was great.

That was great! I liked that guy Mr. Rinald. That guy was hilarious. Poor Amelia. So guns existed back then? To bad the person giving the massages is a girl. It would have been funny to see the guys get all jealous. Good Job ::thumbs up::

Pretty funny. I liked the part where Lina and Gourry are fighting over their food and say "Leggo my ego" That struck me as particualry funny. As well as the free HBO. Great Job so far. _

AW, THIS WAS SUCH A GREAT STORY! It should be a humar/mystery rathre then mystrey/humar, as it is totlay funny! too bad there was no pirings...

bye bye

Mistress DragonFlame

"Sticks and stones my brake my bones but words will leave gashes that will feaster for all eternity..."

dayly addtion to saying:

"ANYBODY GOT SOME DIS-INFECTAIN?"

Oh! I just loved the part about the free hbo! on with the reading of te rest of the story of death type things!

bye bye

Mistress DragonFlame

"Sticks and stones my brake my bones but words will leave gashes that will feaster for all eternity..."

dayly addtion to saying:

"ANYBODY GOT SOME DIS-INFECTAIN?"

LMAO! This is the funniest thing I've ever read! I almost busted a gut, I was laughing so hard!

What about the free HBO? Ah well.

That was so funny! Heheh. Y'know what? Right after I read that part where it says, "They made up good memories for them. Like the time they all went camping. That was a fun time, even thought it never happened," I got this pop-up about a camp. Creepy, ne? What? DON'T ROLL YOUR EYES AT ME!

Anyways, this was really funny. I love this!

LOL! *rolling around on the floor (not literally, but you get the idea)*

That was SUCH a completly pointless ending, which makes it perfect! PERFECT I tell you! That was one of the best Slayers fics I've ever read, not only because you included the mystery genre, but because you made fun of it, tore it up, Dragon-Slaved it to death, and just plain made it unrecognizable. Hilarious! I loved it. Thank you. _

Well I guess thats what would happen if Gourry managed to project an aura of stupidity. looking into some people's mind is a dangerous task.

Though I think its odd Amelia had an edible nightgown. wonder how long that will take to hit Lina.

I'll stop now so I don't rant away the plot points.

That was a wonderful ending, so hilarious and confusing and so forth! Infact I laughed so hard one time I couldn't breath lol You are such a great humor writer. I hope you will compose more great Slayers works. Thank you!

Oh, this is hysterical! You have a great style for writing humor. Hope you write more soon!

LOL. Only read the first chapter so far and already I'm laughing my $$ off. I especially liked the wording of the letter and the "superjustice" passage. _ Alright, just gotta read the rest of this, hope its as good as the first part.