‘She pulled her down by her shirt collar, Sayaka's lips smashing into hers.’

Wasn’t Sayaka nuddy?

Please tell me youll update soon! Though it's been over a year T_T

This is a really good fic and I wanna know what happens next!

I am going to follow this for two specific reasons. 1. You made a gurren lagann reference
2. This is hilarious
That's all I really have to say. Sorry I don't have anything profound.

awww and you just stopped at the good part. Nice to see you've read those other fan fics too, its too bad soul intercourse hasnt been updated in a year but who knows.

Excellent

Oh my oh my, I'd love to see more of this. But your title sounds like "true love shall thaw a frozen heart" from frozen XD. JK JK. Homura really has to take care of herself better, though it's not that surprising considering how much she's gone through and how she's willing to kill herself to prevent the incubators from observing the law of cycles(Madoka).

Keep up the good work! Update soon! It was getting really good!

CAN YOU PLEASE UPDATED SOON!

I love this story; it's brilliantly written. ((if that makes sense.))

I really wanna see what happens next! :D This chapter was super interesting.

gotta like how homura is using the other girl's backgrounds as basis for her own.

btw, just wanna ask, have you seen the madoka magica movie yet? the movie really gave great justice (pun intended) to sayaka's character, as well as somewhat giving fuel for sayakaXhomura.

Excellent two chapters.

omg this story is good, i'm finding it really interesting so far, keep on updating!

I liked that beginning part with memories of other timelines with Sayaka. :)
The story seems to be progressing fairly well. I think it's interesting that Sayaka's gem is completely clear now. So positive emotions can clean a soul gem? Cool.

Damn you Kyubey!

Haha, it's so great to see a new chapter! Really nicely done and great attention to detail, you should feel really proud of yourself mate!

I look forward to the next chapter!

I'm still kind of new at this, so I'm having a little bit of trouble with the formatting of each chapter. When I add a title, page breaks or author's notes, they show up on the document when I view it in Doc Manager, but in the actual fic page itself, they aren't there at all. Anyone know how to deal with this?