I feel like leaving a seven year old to babysit an infant is criminally irresponsible.

I like it! but I'm not sure about the end Xd I like the characters behavior and the trama, thanks for write for us!

This is surprisingly deep. A really good oneshot-I'm going to be thinking about this for awhile.

Very cool story. I like the way you told a story of Vi's past through a bunch of short scenes. Also clever numbering there :p

a dead baby joke...I FEEL TERRIBLE FOR LAUGHING AT THAT! And this might not be humor...oops sorry Dx! Anyway this is pretty good...

You've captured the heart of Vi and Jinx with only a few words. Wonderful.

The characterisation is spot on. Vi is every bit as defensive as she should be, Cait every bit as responsible and considerate and Jinx is just...well, Jinx. I really enjoyed how it's Jinx that reaches out in the end, in her own way, that really, really suited and showed a side to her that you wouldn't think the trigger happy ADC would have.

And the ending line, that was just perfect. Really great job!

Excellent job. You portrayed them very well.

A great story, I really enjoyed reading it and would love to see where it could go, but a oneshot is a oneshot and I'm not getting my hopes up. The story was well written and you have a good understanding of the characters in my opinion, so I am looking forward to more od your work in the future.