Whoa. Deep story. And I really liked the last two sentences. It really gave an insight into Mizuki's thoughts.

Keep it up!

Ammie

WAI! KAWAII!

~Lanti~

had a really great ending!Very thought provoking , and held interest as well.

I really liked that last line :)

All I can say is, poor Mizuki!

Oh yeah, write more HanaKimi fic; needs more and your writing style is really nice _

This is a really good fic from Mizuki's point of view. *sniff sniffs* I haven't seen too many Hanakimi fics around here, even in the Misc. section, so it was really nice to see one. I hope you write more Hanakimi stories, as well as stories about other manga and anime.

{*_*}

wow, that was really great! Hana kimi fics are so rare *sigh* I wish it had it's own section thing. but I really liked yer story makes sense and I'm glad someone wrote upon how Mizuki tries to deal with herself great job