Oh wow this was good. I loved the concept and really found this fitting. Great job.

I'm digging Mitobi more and more with time, especially with authors writing such good stories about the pair. Maybe you should write another story for this pairing and take more time to develop their relationship, since I think such material is sorely lacking on this site. Keep up the good work :)

I never knew I needed this pairing

I really love this! I think it's so interesting how you gave a reason to the lack of Mokuton, and the relationship between Tobirama and Mito was really well written - it felt very authentic.

I keep thinking about if Hashirama ever found out that his kid was actually Tobirama's, or Tsunade finding out that her Grandfather is actually her Great-Uncle while her Great-Uncle is actually her Grandfather. I think it would be a great scene to write when the Hokage's are brought back by Edo Tensei. It could be written as humour or something more serious like drama (though I'd lean towards humour myself).

Haha, sorry for my babble, just had that scene stuck in my head, and if you want to write it I will totally not complain! XD

Thank you very much for the story!

This is fantastic! I'm a huge HashiMada fan, but I adore Tobirama as well, and it pains me that everyone always depicts him as being overly stern and almost... well, asexual. I greatly appreciate that your imagery and vocabulary are so eloquent, and your grammar is nearly flawless (quite a pleasant change from the standard around here, I must admit). Clever concept and very well written!

yissss amazing thanks

Loved it!

Nice story, love the interplay between the characters.

Nice story! I like this ship too.

wow, that was amazing!
I really love the way you write. The words which you use into your story, it makes a really difference when you use for example: moistened... a lot of people would ude just wet, but you're like the real pro for me:)

The end of this story made me think...really, why the mokuton jutsu was lost? What if she really cheated on him? Man, you're really good! I love how you portrated the delicate relatonship between Mito and Tobirama...
Well done! Thank you :)

I really like this. You characterised Mito and Tobirama very well, and I think it's a realistic look at what might have happened. Great job with this, well done.

LOL, did anyone else just die when she told Tobirama he was the father, I was laughing so hard I almost rolled off my bed. XD

Haha Hashirama and Madara. Tobirama and Mito would be interesting.

Ooh Madara deserted the village and Hashirama went after him.

Interesting theory also why no else had Mokuton.

Good work on this piece of work.

nice

This was quite good, clap clap. I love Tobirama. That HashiMada though.