| Reviews for Black and Blue |
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weheartnoelle chapter 31 . 4/26 So so good! I’m so glad I found your story, I read it in one go. Leah and Jacob are such a power couple. They make so much sense too. You’ve written them and their bond so beautifully! Shame it couldn’t be like that in the actual books and movies. They both deserved better! But that’s why I’m grateful for fanfiction. Thank you for writing this amazing story. |
Loveforwolves143 chapter 31 . 12/24/2019 LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVVVVED IT! Such a great story. Everything about this story is great. I am always so happy to see someone pointing out how selfish Sam, Emily, Bella and Edward are. Leah always deserved the happy ending in these books because she really got the shit end of the stick. I laughed so hard when Seth shot Sam in the add and when Rachel yelled at Emily. It always made me mad how selfish they were when it came to them wanting Leah in their lives after what they did to her. They might not have meant to do it, but watching the two people she trusted more than anything break her and then have her watch them get married doesnt help her. I was so happy after Paul got to kill Edward He deserved it for all the problems he caused! |
Sarahn1991 chapter 22 . 11/6/2019 I actually yelled “what?!” in a coffee shop when I read the end of this chapter lol. This story is amazing! |
Wolf9lucky chapter 1 . 10/6/2019 Awesome story! Very very very good! |
whiskeyneat chapter 2 . 7/18/2019 "It seemed that the punishment for being a strong woman was to be rendered voiceless by the mob, a situation that was all the more unbearable because she was so naturally dominant. Tonight she'd play submissive if got her what she wanted. It would be a one-time thing." It's sad that Leah has to do this at all. She's expected to always be strong because she's a wolf. I love her internal dialogue about the vampires. The way you write her is amazing. I love how she explores his house and her insistence on staying with Jacob. The way the two of them start out being vulnerable with one another. How she washes the vamp stench off of him. 10/10 stars. |
whiskeyneat chapter 1 . 7/11/2019 I actually love this so, so much already. These two are going to break my heart, aren't they? |
Aunt Bran chapter 31 . 4/28/2019 Just amazing. Now that I finished reading, I can get on with my life :) This story has taken hold of every waking moment while I read it - LOVED it! I'm so happy with the HEA, and I realize there has to be some rain along with the sunshine to make a good story. An excellent story. |
Aunt Bran chapter 30 . 4/28/2019 What got to me most was when Billy told the story of Embry Call. Beautiful, sad, poignant. |
Aunt Bran chapter 29 . 4/28/2019 Great chapter! It was a hard-won victory :'( |
Aunt Bran chapter 28 . 4/28/2019 LOL - nice touch, with the Carter's little liver pills :) Poor Embry. And Paul. And everyone. I still don't think they can kill Jacob - or why would I be reading this? :) |
Aunt Bran chapter 27 . 4/28/2019 OMG - I always assume Embry and Paul are brothers, for the same reasons you listed. I just can't imagine the others cheating! So cool! And yes! Jacob riding in on his white horse - hoping none of the good guys will perish. But first I have to shower and go to church. Later! |
Aunt Bran chapter 25 . 4/28/2019 Wow! My heart is pounding! Thank God for a glimmer of hope... |
Aunt Bran chapter 24 . 4/27/2019 Oh, cool! It was looking so hopeless. Damn. Gotta sleep again. |
Aunt Bran chapter 23 . 4/27/2019 All I can think is that Jacob will get Leah back no matter what it takes. And Edward is a sniveling coward. What else is new? I'm relieved that they didn't fight because there's nobody in the pack I'd consider expendable, but it never occurred to me they could get to Leah. I did notice she told Paul to stop talking with an Alpha order - wondered how that would manifest itself. |
Aunt Bran chapter 22 . 4/27/2019 LOL! I'm really enjoying the vicarious romance, but no - he could be my grandson :) I just want Leah to wake up next to him. Always. And I want to boot Bella in the ass. I'm really worried about the pack. There's not a member I could spare! |