Fabulous, write more!

wow...that was so good! i love the way you rote that, i started feeling so bad for luke, i love fan fiction that makes me feel like im the person and this totally did that, it was great!

I thot it wuz really good! There were sum funny lines in here, which were good. I liked how you wrote wut they were thinking. Good work!

I love the way you write! I love how you make it flow and keep it smooth and creamy, if you can describe words like that. I don't care. That's how the words seem. Keep up the good work!

awww! that's so romantic! i love the style and setup. awesome! :')

wow...very deep. I liked it. It made me think. Keep up the good work. Thanks!

That was great. There isnt nearly enough L/L fanfiction out there. I hope you write more.

That was great! I hope you continue to write amazing GG stories.

i like!

I usually don't enjoy this type of fic, but you did it well. This was amazing for your first time out. I hope to read more from you!