Reviews for Half-Step Behind |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Seriously! You leave off with us finally getting a kiss scene, and there is nothing left to continue on with. Excellent job, I have love with how you have taken characters that are supposed to be developed, and you have developed more into more earth grounded characters. I would love to read more of your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() im really really hoping you write more, this story is soooo good i would really love to read the courting/ dates they will have. Please write more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() Really enjoyed this. Great writing, great characterisation, brilliantly researched slow building plot. Look forward to where you go next with it |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is by far the best fanfiction I have ever read. Their personalitys we so perfect that I felt like they truly existed. No only that but your reasearch and knowledge of Norse Gods really made the whole thing extremely believable and almost real. I was constantly on the end of my seat. Thank you for such a entertaining and enjoyable story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm totally in LOVE with this story, and cannot wait to read a new chapter. I don't know if my mind just missed something or if I'm just a halfwit currently being sleep deprived but, I'm wondering if Loki will ever be able to or find a way to heal his eyes? I love the plot but it kills me that Loki's blind. You don't have to answer haha. My tiny mind is trying to come up with the finishing plot that I WANT to happen, not what may happen. Anyway, can't wait for the next update~ -ShadowsOfPenAndPaper |
![]() ![]() Omg please update! This is so good! I want to know what happens next. Are they going to have a cute date, go out somewhere? What's going to happen?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well isn't this exciting, love it, can't wait for moreee |
![]() ![]() ![]() Best Loki/Tony story I've ever read! thank you for writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. I absolutely love this story. I am so glad that Loki took to the kiss so well. I am also glad that Tony decided for the courting. It will help show Loki he is worth it. Can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() So I liked the story so far. A little sad that it took 47 chapters to get to just kissing when the stories rated M but it is a good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story. Soglad to see that you are not giving up on it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *sigh* Finally! Thank you for the new chapter! I adore the love-hate-confusion thing they have going on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute! |