Ohmygodsthatwasamazingiloveditsomuchimdyingholyshitpleasewritemoreplease!

This so sweet! -And the way they all had a brother group hug at the end . Just to cute.
I bet Fying mint bunny, Captian Hook, Tinkerbell,a d the rest of thier magical friends were standing near by watching and smilling at the seen .
Flying mint bunny:*takes picture*"How sweet is that?"
Me:Very. Glad to see they're not mad with each other any mote.
Wales:*looks up at us witj questioning look*.
Nightmare:*leaves before I can rune the moment*.

I like the detail in this thing. The fight's not elaborated, but it didn't matter anyway. There are some transitions that are weird though, going from England's limited 3rd person to his brothers' then back. Also, what the hack was with that sheep thing? But overall, it's pretty much alright.

Write on.!
Yuna