She should of been arrested wether she helped steve or not shes clearly been with her brother on tons of crimes before steve and there for shouldn't be out and should be in prison even if its on a deal for a shorter sentence fhis is bullshit

1. If she was locked up like she SHOULD of been that wouldn't of happened she clearly knows the crimes they do as she is with him there for she should be locked up too even if she makes a deal so this is very unrealistic

2. Steve would never love a stupid criminal bitch

She should be locked up what the hell!

Steve was lucky to have someone nice and brave enough caring for him like Mandy.
Nice ending with her telling them tom hug and give each other some brotherly love.

You have their arguing down very well. :)

Ahhhhh, sweet ending! Great story!

This guy is evil! Thank god she has seen the light! Glad Steve pulled through

Glad Mandy has made an appearance! So you didn't hurt Steve enough... Love the extra whump!

Really great chapter, loved the comfort!

Omg noooooo, he has to be okay! Great rescue!

Yay! The witness saw the light! Love your Mandy character, time she steps up and ditches her loser brother! Hope she can get help soon!

Ouch! Steve is in serious trouble even with this nurse! How can this guy refuse to let his wife come forward? Have met so many people like that! Hope she finds a way and they can get closer to finding Steve. Another great chapter!

Brilliant chapter. Steve is in deep trouble, hope this woman can get him out!

As a fan of your story I was inwardly hoping that this would last longer but that’s just me. I never want a good story to end. I want it to be like a soap opera that keeps going for years.
I’m not disappointed on the contrary. I think it ended well with Steve back on his feet and bantering with Danny. I like having Amanda there and I can always continue the story in my imagination.
Come back soon.

My boy can walk and Mandy’s alive. Danny and Steve are back to bickering. This is so heart-warming.