LOVED this story! It's really well writen! Congrats!
I just wonder why it's rated T, I think with K is perfectly fine.
About the sequel, you can write it or not, I honestly think it's perfect just like this.

Keep going please

Awesome best story ever!

poor sherman he belongs with mr peabody

i really love this story at some parts it made me cry because this story had so much power. it felt powerful and breathtaking for my opinon i loved it.

I have to say... William is my favorite character out of the cast of OC's... He's just so angsty (and the fact that he wants Sherman to stay with Mr. Peabody is always a plus (even if it is because he hates Sherman))

You sure didn't disappoint, I loved the final chapter I loved the entire story you did an amazing job. I hope you come up with and decide to write a sequel I feel you did a great job with Mr. Peabody's dialogue. LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! Please continue I can't get enough of this father/son pair this is certainly one of my top favorite MPAS fanfics.

Awwww this was a very sweet end to the story! I'm glad to see that the Peabody and Spring families seem to have united. And better yet, that Sherman can have a relationship with his biological family now too. :) I would absolutely LOVE to see a sequel! If you have an idea, by all means, I will be eagerly anticipating one.

1) Please do a Sequel! (Put Penny in there! Where's Penny and her reaction to this?!)

2) If you're not confident in your Peabody dialogue, take "advanced words" like "undoubtedly", then go to a website with a thesaurus function (like ) and find the synonym that you've probably never heard of or have heard it used a few times (like "indubitably") Peabody graduated from Harvard, so he uses a high level of vocabulary (read history, fiction or reference books labeled at 12th grade or college level, they usually have high vocabulary)

The funniest thing is, some kids (I'm apparently included in this clause, according to my peers, whom I doubt) have learned such vocabulary by 6th or 7th grade (but all my "high vocabulary" I acquired just by reading a lot of fiction)

Don't doubt yourself, you're an incredible writer, just do a bit of grammar and vocabulary research for Peabody's dialogue and you'll do just fine.

Wow. Just wow. I was blown away by this! It was soooo good, I could not stop reading from start to finish. Great job! If you ever do make a sequel, I will DEFINITELY look out for that.

*Smiles* Lovely chapter! I enjoyed it immensely! although..the only confusing part of this chapter was the part where BOTH Sherman and William and even Alice where you pretended they were each Peabody's kid was all..*smiles sweetly* but still..I loved it anyways!

Your peabody dialogue is better than mine! XD i know the feeling, it's so hard. Good story, loved it.

I am glad everything worked out in the end)

First of all, can I just say that this story is AWESOME?!
The interactions don't feel forced or overly thought out, which helps the flow.

The only things missing, I believe, are Penny or one of Sherman's other friends and how they feel about this whole thing.

Curse you adults(except Peabody), not even thinking about the power of social bonds between children!

I'll be following this... very closely.

This is an awesome story so far! I really hope that the Springs realize that though they love him, Sherman is best off in the only home he ever knew. I'm really looking forward to the rest of it! Keep it up. :)