I play the game but never knew there was a manga/comic for it. Lloyd (and sometimes Sheena) is my two go to characters while my sis goes for Colette, Genis or Raine (magic wielders to my swordsman). I figured it out kinda early but my sis needed the reveal.

I feel bad for Kratos sometimes. Poor guy lost his love and then his kid opposes him. Anyway, great job capturing the emotion.

I recently played the game through for a fourth time after so long of waiting for chronicles to come out and only noticed how noishe reacted when kratos was nearby this time around. Love that he sealed the deal for dear old kratty!

I always like to see different writers' rendition on how Kratos came to realize the truth. Interesting story here, and quite perceptive. I too, thought it was strange that there was never any Kratos-Noishe recognition scene. Either Kratos being too level headed or Noishe too good in acting.

You may want to reread this though. There are several typos. Nothing too major or detracting from the story, but well, you know... sorry, just my silly pet peeve. Examples:
'...obeying his own council..'- Do you really mean 'council'? I have trouble comprehending this sentence.
'Murmuring the world...'-word

Sorry if I came across being too nitpicky. I enjoy your story:)

I really like this one and others that have done Kratos' point of view, I really like how you brought Noishe in, I noticed that fact too and it's fun to see it used. You know what else would be fun but hasn't been done yet? No one has done what his reaction would be when Noishe and Genise find them after Lloyd has been captured be the renegades. That would be awesome to see.

Clue.

You right the best Lloyd and kratos father son fics! Or at least really amazing ones. I literally just beat the ps3 game a couple hours ago and I'm a out to start the second some time soon. Lloyd and kratos are my favorite characters and the more fics about these two the better. I hope you write more. :) You did an awesome job writing kratos's perspective.