really interesting! please add on because this is great!

Please write more. Please.

I think this is a really cute story and I hope you write more!

I love this story. It is so detailed and portrays the characters very well. Can I ask though that before you post your next chapter that you skim through looking for small mistakes. There were several times when you forgot the s in she and some times you switched between present and past tense. That is all that I saw. This stroy is really easy to get wrapped up in. Very well done. Can't wait to read more!