| Reviews for Sawada Nana's smiles |
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crystalputri chapter 1 . 6/9 same as comic. what is the point of recarnation if you can help your son? |
lifeisbooks342 chapter 2 . 6/13/2017 please carry on! I love it! |
Animelover20003 chapter 2 . 6/11/2017 Can you maybe do a one shot of her reacting to the ring battles? I think it might be funny for Nana to follow him because she was suspicious (Him against Xanxus match) and blow her top at how close they get to death. |
Xyori Nadeshiko chapter 2 . 1/12/2017 Oh que mala no lo dejes alli! Continualo onegaiiiii |
Gal chapter 2 . 6/19/2016 Please continue this story! (You could have Nana/Harry reakize what's going on and try to smooth over things...She can make a deal with Reborn...In the end, she can be like that one person everyone goes to for help...) |
Shadow Wolf 15846 chapter 2 . 12/6/2015 Lol |
dragonlily22 chapter 2 . 5/6/2015 Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update THIS, and your OTHER stories, again SOON! Thank you! |
greenmonochrome chapter 2 . 1/19/2015 This is a super interesting premise! I like it! |
Dumti chapter 2 . 1/8/2015 Interesting concept and plot. I like it! Now I have a half-made plot made in my mind, thinking, instead of Nana's father dreading his future son-in-law, how about Iemitsu dreading his future mother-in-law aka reincarnated Harry Potter/fem-Harry? Damn... Iemitsu's in for a rough ride XD |
yvonna chapter 2 . 11/18/2014 I really liked your story and cant wait for your next chapter(s)! I wanted to tell you the spelling i saw that was wrong, because i like it when people tell me. When you mention Hibari, there shouldn't be a 't' at the end of though. You wrote "Hi instead of he when reborn showed up and Tsuna screamed. And in the last paragraph you put an e on the end of child when Nana asked reborn whose child he was. You should try using lines or something to show time skips. I really do like your story, its a very unique ideal and could go very far, the only thing i don't really like is that Nana doesn't really show any harry personality traits. Harry would never have let his kid grow up bullied ( and the main reason Tsuna was the way he was was because of and absent dd and air-head mom) shed have him take self difference classes or something, and harry so paranoid by the end of his fourth year that he slept with his wand. and even before that could wake up instantly to Rons screaming in third year clear headed and ready, he always had to be on his toes, I don't think he would trust that flier so easily or anything. I get that he i Nana now, but just how much does he remember, what of his old personality carried over? Maybe you should make a chapter to explain that, or redo the first chapter, and you should it had a lot of simple mistakes, the same kind i get when i type to fast and don't go back over it or us spell-check, and it didn't really...explain much...honestly if that had been the only chapter up wouldn't be bother with this story no matter how great i think the ideal is, but it is a great ideal, and i like the second chapter much better, so i will follow this story untell you drop it, or break at least three of my 'I DONT READ' taboos If you need ideals or inspiration there are two story's i recommend Casalinga by Freydris and Dusk To Dawn by reighost both are here on |
mochilera chapter 2 . 11/10/2014 cuan llegue el momento de Nana/Harry patear traseros va a ser impresionante. :) |
DragonPhoenix1026 chapter 2 . 11/3/2014 Please update your Story when you can ..I really like it.. And I want to know what happens to Nana and Tsuna...Please and thank you Sincerely, Amaryllis Lucio |
Dedicated4reading chapter 2 . 10/30/2014 More please? |
vampireharry the 2 chapter 2 . 10/29/2014 This seems really interesting! I look forward to more! |
Guest chapter 2 . 10/24/2014 nice. I look forward to reading more. I hope you decide to continue this story. I have found only one other Harry is Nana fic and that story didn't go very far into the time-line. |