Spoiler!

plot twist ! everything changed when the earth kingdom attacked!

Cant wait for the next chapter! Wish to see more action next time!

I really like this :)

Excited for the update :) Can't wait till the next chapter!

Interesting story so far. Natsu isn't being a very good king if he's running about with bandits instead of securing peace and the like. We'll see what happens with poor Wendy now that Gajeel and Jellal are involved. Lucy comes across well, but if she hasn't gotten Cana to warm up to her in the next chapter, she's losing her touch!

Looking forward to more!

very interesting! I can't wait to see how the story continues. Thank you!

Wow! I am constantly blown away with how you continue to make this story so good :) I love your spin on these characters and seeing how they get by in this beautifully dark and complex world you have created.
This is one of the few fanfics I still follow and I can't wait for your next instalment! Thanks for writing this!

Yay! I was starting to worry that we wouldn't hear from you again! But, as alway, you have followed up with a brilliant chapter, beautiful written, and not just that, but it has (the beginnings of) GajeelxLevy! Ahhh :D
Thank you so much for this chapter and I eagerly await the next!

This story is awesome. I really hope you are considering updating soon. I can't wait. You're writing style is amazing. Update soon!

Hahah think that former review was a mistake. Was probaly supposed to write something else. But looking forward to next chap.

update please

You'd think she had the three her mom had cannon wise

Enjoying the story so far.
Update soon! :D

Hmmm... And the pieces are slowly falling into place. We got a small look of ft's members and some of their group dynamics.

Good to see hat Cana still seems like a senior member and that attitude (lol), she's one of the most suspicious of who Lucy is not to mention her observation and presumption of Lucy being of high born status, from how she talks does she have a grudge against those in the high echelons of society?

Also, oh hey it's Gildarts! I'm Curious to know if he knows Cana is his daughter here? Still given the lack of interaction it seems that isn't true.

Overall this chapter is more of for speculations and a short look on how even if Natsu says Lucy's in the guild she's not considered part of the groupu until she proves herself and gains their trust, I not to mention telling the truth.

Hi! Wow this fic is amazing! I really like it! I read all chapters in an hour lol the plot is still not clear but I'm sooo curious about it! I hope you'll update soon!