awwww, that's so sad and romantic all at the same time. Although I have to say the sad mood was kinda lost for me at the end because unfortunately the last to lines rhyme which just seemed to make me laugh :P

That was REALLY original. Plus A/S. Yay. Nice job.

Hi there,

I like what you have so far here. Yes! Hoshi and Jon, now they would be a cute couple. Although I have to admit I bet Trip would want to strangle his best friend Jon. Please write more.

:) She married Jon. That's the best part. Anyway I have a suggestion since the middle part isn't quite logical with Tucker getting a job when he loved space so much. Maybe you could say he got a commision on another starship as a captain? That's why he had to leave Hoshi since she's only still an ensign.