This plot is way too choppy and disjointed, reading the story is disorienting and not at all enjoyable for more than brief moments. You do seem quite creative but need more practice and skill to bring out the best of it

ok really, what's with everyone and their fucking grandpa just letting fucking karui do shit like this without any punishment? if a bitch slap you YOU SLAP BACK. Don't take shit from no one. I thought you would know this with the way you made Naruto kill those drunks from Konoha. Why doesn't he bitchslap karui for being stupid?

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Hmm, so Naruto is now in konoha wonder what the 3rd hokage will try anyways keep up the great work!

red and blue was an interesting reading. I like the style of time skipping though i expected naruto to change his demeanour after 9 years timeskip at least somewhat.
ps. if he made fugaku cuckold i i wouldn't mind at all )

Nice chapter. Like how Naruto interacts with mifune. Like how Samui is missing him. Wonder how they will reconcile. Can't wait to read more

really loving this so far! looking forward to more!

Holy shit it’s back! Dope chapter G. You’ve really gone deep with the character development.

SO YOUTHFUL! What Kakashi did...very unyouthful. She just wanted to be a tease and Dom. What's so bad about that?

Hellooooooo! Click* BOOOM!

Love this story and just read the red and blue short story. Love it and hope to see both get finished.

I really hope Samui's feelings change for the better and the romance blooms a lot more between Naruto and Samui

Cool chapter continue please.

boring chapter and boring dumb manwhore MC lol one kiss and date Samui looks like fucking slut.

Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on the story.