| Reviews for Turning Points: Teamwork |
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xfel chapter 7 . 7/15 Wow. I don't think there are any other stories where Ragnarok actually happens, and it's just as horrifying, twisted, glorious as you'd expect it to be. I applaud you for going through with it. |
Goten Askil chapter 7 . 6/12 Damn, that was a harsh ending. Still, I know the story was about Suzaku and Lelouch but I hoped to hear a bit about the others in the world after. Specifically Kallen, since between making public her passion for battle, her lies to her Britannian friends, her lies about Zero's identity and the Geass to the Black Knights, and still forbidding her from knowing the truth about Lelouch, I think she'd be one of the prime candidates for a bad case of suicide. Oh well, I'm of the opinion that any story is made better with more Kallen in it, so don't bother about it. That was an interesting "what if", and it's refreshing to read about not everything turning out perfect. |
lalalamb chapter 7 . 6/3 I wonder if they can't even lie at a camera. I wonder too what the new species would turned out to be like. Born knowing they're all connected, hahaha sounds like an alien species that invades planets. Seriously though, in any relationship, I like the hardwork of making others (and yourselves) willingly open their hearts instead of being bombarded with information of what a person is like from the beginning. Secrets are like mysteries. We like them; we like uncovering and discovering them. I can see how it'll be difficult to be intimate with anyone especially strangers...unless you find them fascinating? People who spend a lot of time together and with similar dreams will probably have better chances I wish there's more |
Successful World Is A Nice Rel chapter 6 . 10/22/2019 My ff account is Successful World Is A Nice Rel |
SuccessfulWorldIsANiceRel chapter 7 . 10/22/2019 Wow, I liked the story, especiallly the ending. I wanted to read how would the CG world turn out if Ragnarok succeded, and your take on it was entertaining, as well as the way Lelouch changed at the end. A moment that made me laugh was when Suzaku said what Shneizel got a thearapist for Nunnally. I liked that you gave Lelouch a code. A seeming inconsistency I noticed is Rolo being seen as always being truthful whie Lelouch isnt or is it because of latters code? I am not sure about how Nunnaly waa handled at the end though. And the way C.C. sat in Mariannes lap was story overall a buildup of excitement especialy near the end |
Guest chapter 7 . 12/22/2018 Lelouch definitivamente esta loco y no tiene ninguna consideración un amor por suzaku eso queda mas que claro. Suzaku no quiere ser zero . No es justo que lo obliguen |
Guest chapter 7 . 6/26/2018 BAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH I LOVE this ending. I wish it were canon |
YokaiAngel chapter 7 . 11/24/2017 genius!~~~~~~~ |
Requiem of Twilight chapter 7 . 4/23/2017 i hope nunnally takes the realization that she and suzaku drove lelouch to this and chokes on it. much like suzaku is choking on it now. |
MizuraAyumi chapter 7 . 12/12/2016 WOW. I did not expect such a dark turn! It was surprising but so well written! |
l3largus chapter 6 . 11/29/2016 Had to post here because you can't review a chapter twice. Came back to this story because of your amazing story telling and the superb ending. I think this is the only fanfic that's made me want to write/read a fanfic of it! Just... holy shiitake mushrooms! Keep on keeping on! -l3largus p.s. Here's a basket of muffins because you deserve it. |
Dragonheart Of Ireland chapter 7 . 10/9/2016 I really love this story! |
PinkKitty2713 chapter 7 . 7/13/2016 *blinks a few times*... Well, so much for a 'perfect world'... |
KyoREQUIEM chapter 7 . 6/16/2016 Oh man... I had this fanfic on my list for the longest time, but I never got to read the last chapter... And I'm regretting that I had. I'm DYING HERE I was hoping for the last several chapters that everything Lelouch was doing that was connected to the World of C was part of his plan, but NOPE HE CREATES THIS WORLD THIS THIS WORLD OF ... I can't emphasize enough, WRITER-SAN! YOU ARE A TRUE GENIUS IN PLOT! IT HAS BEEN A WHILE SINCE I READ A STORY WITH A PLOT THIS GOOD I'M STILL BRAINWASHED FROM THAT ENDING |
The Richmaster chapter 7 . 6/12/2016 Well that was not the ending that I was expecting, though it definitely makes sense and it does seem like a likely scenario should such a thing happen. Great work; this was really well written. |